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person Kirui
schedule March 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
::contented sigh:: FINALLY! Aah...... the rift is bridged and all is well..........? ::suspicious stare:: :D Masterful methods of explanation! ::sends adoration via internet:: And the twins birthed from the loins of a twin.... who was in turn birthed from the loins of another generation of twins..... Out of curiousity, have you ever read the works of David Eddings?
person keri
schedule March 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Finally Legolas is starting to understand. Your Elrohir is so wonderfully patient and understanding. I love this story
person Rainien
schedule March 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was.....I'm not one to cry at the drop of a hat, yet for the first time in this story, I find myself in tears. That was beautiful - heartbreakingly beautiful.
person Anita
schedule March 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love little ones! :) And I loved the image of Elladan blundering *lol* Twins...it is fitting (and it is something genetical you know!), now Elladan will go through the same as Elrond did...especially with the pranks, hehe.
person Nia
schedule March 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This story is unrivaled! It's SO great!

I desperately want to read the conversation between Legolas and Elrohir - and I hope there will be lots of Legolas angst there!
person Inwitari
schedule March 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is great.... I cant wait until there talke.. .please let Elrohir understand and please let Legolas finally talk about what is wrong with him... this is a great story... i am addicted please write more soon.. thank you
person Viewer
schedule March 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Sweet and sad, nice chapter.
person Tux
schedule March 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Twins! Heehee, I should have seen that coming! I loved Elladan's panic - highly amusing!
Can't wait to read the conversation with Legolas and Elrohir, I'm sure it will be enlightning!
Grrr, going to have to wait until tomorrow evening though - I dare not access this site from work... *sigh* Damn time-zones!
schedule March 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
“Oh, my sainted aunt! I should have known you two would indulge in some hare-brained schemes along the way!” Well said Gimli! No wonder Valinor is calling Thranduil and I’m sure he’s wondering why he didn't sail with Ed. d.

For all his bark I really love Thranduil because he's such a plain speaking but deeply caring person. His advice to Legolas, he's support and comfort of him when he most required it was really touching.

Elladan cracking under the pressure of impending fatherhood was just hysterical! I really didn't see him getting Twins, but I admit I love the symmetry of it. And you know what? I actually felt a little pang for Elrohir and Legolas also. Elrohir *will* be a wonderful uncle, but then I think Legolas will be as well. I really hope these feelings get discussed when 'The Talk' finally occurs.

As always Eressë, I'm anxiously awaiting the next update.

Marie :-)
person HHS
schedule March 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
What time is it?Damn!It's 5:25am(in US-SF,Ca.)and I'm awake!Oh well.Seems to me that Legolas has to get somethings out of his system.It's never good when you keep something from your spouse especially if it's going to help their bng tng to become stronger.