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person Angie
schedule March 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Eresse,

I loved this. I can imagine this in my head as I read, and to me, that is what makes an author good.
I can't wait for your next story. I have thoroughly enjoyed both stories and I look forward to more.

Angie
person Inwitari
schedule March 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was so sweet... Oh I love it... Thank you for putting out two... this story is awesome.. and i cant wait till the next part... yay.. im happy that they are good now...
person Anita
schedule March 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wonderfull ending *bg* I liked the last two chapter a lot! Especially Legolas' and Elrohir's 'show' in thllwallway :) And lots of cuddles to the little twins!
person Viewer
schedule March 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am glad everything is okay for Vie
person Inwitari
schedule March 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
that was so cute.. please I cant wait for more.. yay.. that was awesome... Im so happy for them
person AngelGirl
schedule March 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was great... I mean for Legolas to finally give in, and to fully understand... I mean we all know that he's going to do something stupid, But still... that was I think one of my favorite chapters. Well done in moving my heart again.
person HHS
schedule March 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was so sweet!!!
person Dark Angel
schedule March 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was so sweet and thender... I don´t know really what to say because it left me all speachless and happy :)
person daisy
schedule March 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
My heart just melted...(It's 4 o'clock in a morning)... Such a aweet aweet chapter....I don't know what to say.
I'm so gald that they are finally "togather" as a couple. I have to say, the way you started this story, I was begining to wonder about Legolas for I was one of the very few who defended him in "Calenlass,.." but I trusted your word! and I'm so happy!!! One thing ,though, I wish I could've seen Elrohir fall apart a bit more ( not in a angst way, no more of that!) I wanted to see him being blinded by jelausy or possesiveness or something not so perfect side of him. ( I know you put some scenes here and there in "Calenlass" but I want more!!!) So far, he seems almost too perfest, too knowledgeable, not to mention too patient!! and my goodness I love him for that's what makes him Elrohir. BUT I do feel that a bit too much faults were put on Legolas.( but then again that' whar makes Legoals ever so inocent Legolas, right? :)
I'm sorry I'm rambling. I think I'm sooo afraid that this story is going end soon that I'm tryng put some ideas in you LOL, how desperate can I be ? :) I was SO glad to see TBC at the end of this chapter, you have no idea...
Anyway, I cannot thank you enough for providing us such a wanderful story. Thank you, Thank you Thank you!!!
And I dare say that I hope and hope you'll continue writing.

Thank you !!!!!!!!!
person Tinni
schedule March 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*sniff* Finally.