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person Tux
schedule February 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm, an uncommunicative, cranky husband - I SO know how Elrohir feels! lol

How many chapters are you going to torture us with this time Eresse?!
person Deathangelgw
schedule February 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ooooooohhhhh this is not healthy. Oh oh oh this is SO not healthy!! Legolas needs another butt in the arse!! grrrrrrrrupidupid Elf. *snuggles Elrohir* you are such a sweetie!!! *glares at mean and stupid Legolas* Get a CLUE!! anyhoo...more sooooon!!
person MPB
schedule February 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Dear Norah: There *will* be Legolas angst later. Elrohir isn't going to carry that burden all throughout the story.

Hi lego forever: No, he isn't stupid or thoughtless. Ignorant of some things and misguided in others would be closer to the mark. Let's just say the upcoming expedition is going to prove catalytic in many ways.

This is already the second time I've replied publicly and it's only Chapter 3. But I just want to put you all at ease if I can. I'm truly sorry if this story has proven disturbing to some of you and hope you'll continue to bear with me *and* my two protagonists until their problem is solved. Thank you for all your wonderful support and helpful comments.
person jamie
schedule February 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You're back! Longest week of my life... *sniggers* It was well worth the wait anyhow, as the first 2 chps are extremely intrigiuing to say the least. Wonder what this new evil you've conjured up is all about, has surely got me thinking out all the possibilities. And what's up with Legolas again? Hopefully it's not his self-preservation defences kicking in again. Maybe he feels too emotionally vulnerable? Can't wait to see how everything unfolds.

hugz,
Jamie
person Gilraen
schedule February 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow the next storry is up!! It was really long week without your fic :(

Anyway that with the missing women is scary... It sounds to me as if the orcs , or whatever the creatures are, use them to produce new 'creatures' and the women die afterwards and thats why they get new all the time.. That was just guessing and I am really curious to see what really happens.

And ahh here we have Legolas again.. Before when he was ignorant to Elrohir's love I honestly hated him. Now I am more concerned about him. I don't doubt his love for the twin, but there is something which made him change.. maybe he is scared that he will lose him and thats why he wants to be the one dominating in the bed... and that could also be his reason for pushing him away. OR there is something which i am totally missing and I am very far from the truth :))
But i really feel sorry for Elrohir .. again :( I just hope he doesn't get hurt too much.

Please update soon :)!
person Somali
schedule February 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I had thought that Elrohir's troubles will end with Legolas's binding to Elrohir. *sigh* Trust Legolas to continue to screw up even after the binding. I really pity Elrohir. There has always been no other for Elrohir. Now that Legolas does not feel the pull of the binding, I only fear for Elrohir's heart if Legolas suddenly decides that he wants out of the binding. *sigh*
person Elfy
schedule February 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG - THIS IS BRILLIANT. I HAVE BEEN EAGERLY AWAITING THIS AND NOW IT IS HERE! *dances around*

GREAT STUFF! PLEASE KEEP UP THE BRILLIANT WRITING AND EXCELLENT STORIES!
person Tinni
schedule February 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*groan* What's up with Legolas now? Are we going to have another near death experience or a death?
schedule February 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay, you're Ere Eresse! Oh but what an offering...I can already tell I'm going to be in agonies reading this one. I *do not* like the turn events have taken for Elrohir and Legolas. What sort of *misunderstanding* could bring about this almost abusive behaviour? Actually, I'm not sure I even understand what is happening between them- I'll have to go back and re-read chapter 1 I guess. and and I found another 'expedition' word - "concupiscence" which I'm assuming you're using in the context of illicit sexual desire? *sigh* I'm sorry if this review sounds scatty Eresse, of course I'm ecstatic that you've updated and I *am* intrigued as to what sort of evil is now wreaking havoc in Middle Earth. |^_~|

Marie
person Deathangelgw
schedule February 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*cocks an eyebrow, disturbed* Indeed...why doesn't he feel these 'spousal urges'?! My my, what a way to start it! Oh now I can't wait!!