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person Mel
schedule February 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Legolas is keeping secrets??? Hmmmm.. I have a guess as to what the secret could be. I won't say here though, because I'd really hate to spoil your story for all your fans. It still doesn't explain his attitude toward my favorite elf, though.
I'm glad Elladan is there this time to knock some sense into Legs if need be. Not to mention Thrandy turning him over his knee!!
This is such a great story - I'm so glad you're sharing it with us. Thanks!
person Tinni
schedule February 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for all the personal reassurances. At least I can take heart that everything will work out. But that doesn't make me want to bash Legolas's head it any less. Honestly I keep tearing my hair out over this "evil". Is the doing of the bat-woman, what's her name, I can't remember. You know the vampire that morgoth had in his service. She's dead but maybe someone like her.
person Rainien
schedule February 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
A-HA! Clues! And a Plan! And a male Elf who is not so much an idiot at this point in time!
person Somali
schedule February 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
In my opinion, Legolas is far off from making enough amends to Elrohir. I seriously have no idea as to wh's 's behaving like this. It's heartbreaking to see Elrohir's moods swinging from extremes from Legolas's actions. *sigh*
person Rainien
schedule February 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
LOL Heaven protect us all from males who have no idea what's going on inside their heads or hearts - or if they do, deny it to those ones who should mean the most. Yes, I still think Legolas needs to be smacked. He's reminding me far too much of my ex-husband right now and that's REALLY not working in his favor. *waves her hand in the air to brush away thoughts of idiot males* Once again, well done. Till tomorrow....... *S*
person lego forever
schedule February 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Eresshankhanks for responding to the reviews. I noticed that you have been constrained to respond to the reviews of this story twice already - unlike the last tiAs fAs far as i'm concerned, my being "disturbed" is a good thing because it holds my interest. There are stories which I have tried to read and follow but I found disturbing in a totally different sense that I just stopped and decided that it isn't worh my time with the intenet; but yours is an altogether different story. That's why I believe that you would not take your readers in the same thread as Calenlass. It had a good plot but that one is over and I do give you much much more credit than just to expect a repeat of that plot in this story. It's just maybe your avid readerse soe so affected by the last one that they have not quite emotionally recovered from the emotional turmoil of the last story (which I credit to your superb writing ability) that they were not yet prepared to go through another one so soon. Anyway, don't mind our comments much. I love this story already like the ones before it. I guess Legolas is frightened about losing himself, his own identity with this pull he is feeling. I know he is not a witless wood elf and his good traits are not only centered of his warrior skills. remain loyal to him ;)
person lego forever
schedule February 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I meant ... I remain loyal to him ;)
person kirameki
schedule February 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*jaw drops to floofloor* |O_O| Oh. My. God. I can not believe Legolas! How could he say those things! I want to hit him more than I did BEFORE they got together! I had difficulty reading it and was hard pressed to continue. , po, poor Elrohir. What HAS happened to his loving archer? It almost makes me wanna cry. I hope Legolas comes to terms with himself or whatever is causing him to act thusly soon or else I can't guarantee his safety. |-_-;|
person Shiera
schedule February 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This keeps getting better and better!

Every chapter has me bitting my nails, or has my eyes wide open in shock and expectancy! You never let the reader down!
This is the best LOTR fanfic I have ever read!
This is amazing writing and story-telling! Please continue!

Eagerly awaiting more!

~Shiera
person Dark Angel
schedule February 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I can't decide who I am more upset with, Legolas for acting that way or Elrohir doindoing nothing about it. I really, realy hope he does something about it because I fell very bad for him :(

And as some of those who commented, this is also my absolutley favorite story!

P.S. Changed nick, now I'm Dark Angel, used to be Gilraen :P