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for A Heart for Change

by elfinesse

person eawen penallion
schedule May 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi, any news of an update? I really loved the first story in this series, looking forward to more
person eawen
schedule May 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I LOVED your first story of Filigwi and Elladan - please please continue this one as soon as possible!

The hidden love of Elrohir (he REALLY hid it from his twin??) sounds dangerous and dark - Love it!!!
Dying to know what is wrong with Filigwi, and how Elladan is going to reconcile himself to an independent 'Little bird' ...

Eawen
person Deathangelgw
schedule March 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*wags finger* what did I tell you?! GAH I WANT MORE!!!!! Oh this has whet the appetite and I love how you play them...for some reason I just blanked on Figwit's redone name...not good. But anyhoo...this one I can't WAIT for more! Do keep writing...PLEASE!!!!!!
person Soledad
schedule February 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Arphenion is a highly interesting character -- I'm curious what you are planning with him. And it seems that Figilwi is still not completely healed, hm? Will he ever overcome his inferiority complex, I wonder. Once again, a great story.
person Twilight
schedule February 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay, a sequel of your story with Filigwi and Elladan! With Elladan so often away on his orc excursions, it must be hard on the introverted and insecure Filigwi who remains behind.

The last part of the story with Elrohir and Arphenion was a little confusing, i.e. the flow from who was thinking/talking and what was meant etc. So his big secret was being a kinslayer? Is that what divided the two apart? Since some of your readers are not familiar with this character such as myself, I hope to read more details about him in the upcoming chapters.
person Rainien
schedule February 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful! I loved the other story and I'm looking forward to seeing the rest of this one.