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for Tokowhà

by Nyssa

person kirameki
schedule June 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh, this is amazing. The story has really sucked me in! I can't wait to see what else happens. I'm really not liking Karl or Sean right now. v_v The scenes with Orlando and Viggo are really cute though. XD I hope Orli gever ver Sean, and Sean realizes what he gave up when he let go of Orli. =P I loved the little Owl scenes. Viggo is such a sweetie. XD I wonder what drove Orli to do the erotic foot massage though...
person attirb
schedule April 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yeah!
New chapter!
Thanks for this nice easteregg!
person Steph
schedule February 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ch. 3 - Oh my God, why did you leave it there?! Oh, I know. So I would come back. And I will, because this is absolutely awesome!
person lady yuna
schedule February 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i think u should write more it's very good
person attirb
schedule February 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi!
This is a very good start for a promising author-partnership and a promising story
I liked it very much!
:-)
I am looking forward to the next chapters.
You seem to work well together.
Carry on writting!
person Enya
schedule February 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee*

Very good, guys! I like what you've done so far!!!

WHERE'S THE REST!? *giggle*

Keep it up!!!!!

~mee~
person Steph
schedule February 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WHAT!? Sean turned Orlando down? Just kidding. It's just that I love those two, and it hurts to think that. But really, this is really awesome so far, and I can't wait to read more. It seems to be wonderfully complicated and involved...I like;)
person Arnettra
schedule February 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
SEXY!!!! Uhm, Sean Bean and Karl Urban, yum. Please update and soon!