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ARE YOU EVER GONNA UPDATE THIS STORY??? I'M DYING OVER HERE!!!

Hi, I wanted to tell you how much I enjoyed this science fiction piece you have written. I saw it reced off a LOTR AURPS site and came over to read it. The recomendation came from somebody pretty darn picky or I wouldn't have bothered. No offense. I am glad I did. From the bloody sheets to carving out the chip from the head to the licking behind the ear you got me but good. The whole invincible Karl and the patrols and the infiltration and the pix! Terrific! Great idea and you ran with it. I wish you would finish it. Honestly. Enjoy your style, good characterization especialy the triangle of Billy, Dom and Elijah, all in all very well done. Good workable original idea. Thank you so much for sharing!

Ooh, and the plot thickens! I really love what you've done with Elijah's character. He's just so fuckin' adorable! I must read more of this fabulotastic story, I must! I must!

Wow, what an amazing story. There's a few mistakes in the grammar here and there, but wow. I just love the science fiction theme you have going here. Sort of reminds me of a cross between A.I, GATTACA, and Final Fantasy. Thank you for making my day! Please, please continue!

-Kate <3

Wow. This is such a creepy, sci-fi matrix meets queer eye for the straight guy story! Love it!

Ummm. Kay, I guess this is cool. This should TOTALLY be made into a movie!

Fuck, this is weird. Weird as fuck. But I love it. Please do update, at least I'll be following. :)

Interesting. LOL I'm not quite sure what's going on, but I'm intrigued enough that I'll be looking for future chapters.