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for A Difficult Bride

by ambur123

person Beloved
schedule March 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*SOBS* Way to sock it to Lea. My only objection is that you didn't ...ahem...detail just how 'high-handed' Orophin was with Anna. But other than that, I can't wait for the next chapter.
person Erin Dragon
schedule March 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Talk about get ur own back! Poor Mina! I LOVE this story! Its really good. Please update soon, I don't want to wait long! L8rs -Erin
person loveroflegolas
schedule March 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Plz update soon, i cant wait
person Rangerlady
schedule February 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Just wanted to tell you I totally adore this story. I think you have a wonderful way and gift of writing. I love how you slowly take the relationship between the two further step by step as well as their feelings and their passion for one another, that makes this story all the more exquisit. Also, your language is wonderfully descriptive in every aspect. Very nice work, keep it coming and looking forward to the next chapters very much!
person loveroflegolas
schedule February 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love it! update soon.
person Rainien
schedule February 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is such a wonderful story. I like the way you portray Haldir.
person loveroflegolas
schedule February 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OOOhh cliffhanger! I love your story so u have to update. I thought it was so funny when she said "I did not know he would leak." That one had me rolling on the ground with laughter.
schedule February 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
yummy haldir goodness....

fwahhhh... he can make me angry anytime..

great story...

keep up the good work...
person Rainien
schedule February 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You've made a great start here. I'm loving this so far. LOVE the chapter length. I'm a bit confused about one thing, though. How many handmaidens went to Lorien with Mina? It seems that only one went, but she has two different names - Anna and Tari. Are they the same elleth or two different ones? Looking forward to more. *S*
person loveroflegolas
schedule February 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Amazing. Please update as soon as you can.