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for The Price of Pride

by ArielTachna

person Jade
schedule February 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I said it at the group and i'll say it here as well... I read, I enjoyed and I look forward to more if it... It's a great story

Jade
person Rainien
schedule February 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You've got a good story going here - one that I look forward to following. Nice chapter length and attention to detail but you don't get bogged down in too many unnecessary words. Well done. I'll be watching for future chapters.