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for The Price of Pride

by ArielTachna

person MarzBar
schedule April 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I spent most of my day reading this very sad love story. Please continue soon please. I don't want it to end here.
person AnnaB
schedule July 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is one fine piece of writing . Easily one of th best "amature" pieces I have read , and worthy of publication . I look forward to reading the rest . You have captured the essence of the people created by Tolkein perfectly , and my heart aches for poor Legolas . I bow to your talent !

Anna
person Aysha
schedule July 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wonderful as allways!

Looking forward to read more of this - it's allways getting better - poor Leggy!
schedule May 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thank you to everyone who has left reviews. To answer a few of the comments. Don't worry, the story won't be over any time soon. We still have the war of the ring to get through, Legolas doesn't leave for Valinor until after Aragorn dies 120 years later, and the story doesn't actually start until 200 years after that. No, I'm not going to fill in every last detail, but I am going to fill in quite a few of them. Also, I am not a professional writer, although I do hope to eventually get my original stories published. I have, however, been writing for 20 years, so that gives me some facility with the process. Again, thanks for all the feedback.

Ariel
person deathskiss
schedule May 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am hopelessly addicted to this story. It is beautifully written; please update soon!
person Aysha
schedule May 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow!
I was away for a time and I come back to find a wonderful written story waiting for me... =) It's wonderful, yet so very sad! Poor, poor Legolas! :..(
I suppose your story is going to end rather soon, isn't it? Sad thought too... :..(
But before it does I have to repeat myself and say, that your writing is just wonderful - it's so believable and one can feel with your characters... - it's nearly perfect! ^_^
Thanks for sharing!!!

Aysha
person Lynda
schedule May 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Dear author:

Thank you for writing such a wonderful story. The Price of Pride is truly one of the most well written fanfics I have ever had the pleasure to read. You have a real talent, and I hope you are working on other stories. You should be published! I would certainly pay to read your work. I have suspicions that you are a professional writer. I have been up until the wee hours the last couple of nights reading your fic, and will look for others by you in the future. Thanks again for the enjoyment you share with others.

Lynda
person Elendili
schedule May 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh!! Poor Legolas! This is so sad! But...such a good story! This is so well written, and well thought out. Can you give him a happy ending ? I am waiting with baited breath to see what develops.....
person deathskiss
schedule May 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh my God- This is brilliant!!! I can't believe it took me so long to finally read this- update soon!
person Jacquie
schedule May 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely stunning - I can't think of words good enough to describe this story. I am a complete fan. More please :-)