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for Salvation

by miriellar

person Lucifer
schedule March 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LIKE FRICKEN WOW DUDE!!!! MUST HAVE MORE!!!!!!!!!!
person yue
schedule May 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ohhhhhh the evil dad from hell has finally hit the dust!! wooohoooo. man was i happy about that. update soon!!! i wanna know what the letter says. and the girl bondign was a great idea. as i said UPDATE SOON!!!!
person Wren
schedule May 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
damn straight girl!! break that kneecap!! lol.. clears throat.. who's blood thirsty? looks around sheepishly.. lol.. oh yeah sorry that would be me right?! lol.. ok sorry .. lol.. off to the next chapter.. lol.. by the way have i told you how much i love this story?! all of your characters are making me fall in love with them.. lol.. and i usually do not like haldir.. but now all i want to do is kiss all of his scars for him.. lol.. ok really this time i am going to go .. i have a couple of more chapters to go.. dont worry .. I'll be babbling more later.. lol.. wren
person Wren
schedule May 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
yeah right .. sorry that he had been caught.. big jerk.. i am sooo glad she wants to see him put to death.. . grr.. monster that he is it will probably be a better death than he deserves.. grrr.. and might i say .. oh my gosh what a horrible dream.. poor thing.. but you know now that i think about it .. waking from a dream like that might almost be worth it if our dear legolas was in the bed with me.. you know .. for comfort and .. stuff.. lol.. ok .. going now .. next chapter to read.. more babble later.. wren
person Wren
schedule May 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
.. umm.. poison can be painful too.. .. are they going to use a painful one on him .. are they .. are they.. huh.. huh.. lol..ove ove legolas.. going after her like that.. deep sigh.. sniff.. i want to be her now.. lol.. .. going to next py npy now.. sniff.. love that man.. lol.. wren..
person Wren
schedule May 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh well,, when you put it that way.. *g*.. ok so yeah i have a problem with the whole forgiveness thing but i can see her point.. not wanting to become like him.. luckily it was taken out of her hands.. lol.. Thank you thank you thank you for such a great update.. so many chapters at once.. i wish more writers did that.. i can't wait for more.. really really LOVE this story.. Wren
person Wren
schedule May 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ok if you don't update soon i am going to hyperventilate.. for real .. i am .. wow.. no really .. i am stunned.. wow.. i just sat up and read this whole thing in one go and .. i just want the next chapter is that so much to ask.. lol.. really.. if they dont hurry up and get that bastard i am going to scream.. great story many happy thoughts sending your way so you can write faster.. lol.. wren
person Arwen
schedule May 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Pleasdatedate soon! I love the characters, love the story! Itso aso addicting. And also I totally feel for the girls situation..have been there times myself.
person yue
schedule May 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YEAHHH u updated. great chapters by the way. lots of fun and sympahty. i dont know whether to envy thalia or kill her. lol. on one hand she's got the hottest elves around her and loving her, and on the other hand she got some pchyo out there trying to kill her or make her life living hell. dang. well update soon. look forward to ur next chapters.
person fuzzyslippurz
schedule May 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh my god, i really like it. write more! i think the characterization of Thalia was pretty good, and one more thing...will there be a lemon? there should be!

your fan,
da fuzzyslippurz