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August 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is still one of the best. I love the characters, the plot, the dialogue. I check every day for an update.
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July 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Loved it, loved it, loved it.......desparately hoping that you'll be adding to it sooooooooon. Thank you so very much. All of your characters are real. kudos.
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May 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thanks from me also for straightening out the chapters. I love how the husband/wife relationship between Phaila and Amaras is developing. I loved the original story and can't wait to see how you weave it all together. Thanks for updating.
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May 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for straightening out the chapters...and adding new ones. Love it, love it, love it!
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May 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
The chapter screw up is fixed....darn, sorry 'bout that.
I hope you are enjoying!
I hope you are enjoying!
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May 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter # 11 is out of order. Chapters 12 & 13 are the same. You are missing the chapter when Phaila is called to service.
I like the re-writes. You've made the sequence of events clearer but kept the dialogur that I love so.
Are you going to post on Open Scrolls too? Your story is a little behind there.
I like the re-writes. You've made the sequence of events clearer but kept the dialogur that I love so.
Are you going to post on Open Scrolls too? Your story is a little behind there.
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May 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
To those reading - Yes, I renamed the story. I have posted more chapters in Open Scrolls....hint, hint
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May 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Did AFF change the title of this? Isn't this Amaras and Phaila? Please update soon. I just re-read the Phoenix and Griffin and NEED more!!!
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April 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Beautifully written as usual. Thanks for the update.
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March 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is wonderful! The lilt of the dialogue is so interesting and the characters are superb. Can't wait for more.