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by ElvenDemagogue

person Rangerlady
schedule February 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that waste ate a confrontation betweragoragorn and Legolas - it really made me sad. Old friends who now find themselves on opposite sides. I am glad this is AU and that they were the best of friends in the real thing. :) Keep up with this, looking forward to the next chapter.
person Beth
schedule February 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really shouldn't be the only one reviewing this, but maybe everyone's just lazy; they're obviously reading it.

I like the idea of bitter/vengeful Aragorn. Like in that other story of yours, my fave one. I'm not sure as to exactly WHY he's vengeful and I want to find out! :D
person Beth
schedule February 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh. Now I understand what A. meant. Cool.

I worry when Elrond has such a bad temper. He's bloody worse than Thranduil! XD That's okay, you write him sensibly enough.

Thanks for the note. Well, if you update this often, I don't mind the chapters being shorter than usual! ;)
person rangerlady
schedule February 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am still very interested to find out, who are the good guys and who are the bad guys in this story. Please continue, now that Aragorn comes into the picture, things are going to get even more interesting!
person Beth
schedule February 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Agh! You leave off just when it's really good! The chapters are too short. Especially compared with your other stories. I think there are sites for declinging verbs in Sindarin, btw.

I didn't think I'd enjoy reading about Elrond in a sexual way,but it's all right! Please continue. You're killie hee here.
person karen
schedule February 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great storyline - love to see Elrond getting some!!! keep writing!!!
person fanficfan
schedule February 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really like the fact, that there is a real storyline here and I am curious to see how things are going to develop. It is interesting to see Elrond, Legolas, Aragorn etc. in roles so unusual and different from the onces we know, but it makes it all the more interesting. Keep up the good work and please update again soon!
person fanficfan
schedule February 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am totally in love with your stories, please update soon!