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for Wipeout

by sagralisse

schedule November 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You, madam, are a *writer*. You have taken the jello of slippery, half-understood life and nailed it firmly to the wall of your story. Every sentence contained a surprise and a rush of recognition. And Karl and Viggo, as we half-know them, were there and breathing all the way. Thank you for posting this.
person meez
schedule July 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Terrific - I do like a good BDSM story; but mostly I'm disappointed in them. Almost nobody writes about pain, the appeal and pleasure of it in a sexual contest, so thank you for doing so. I get a little tired of all the bondage and mild DS stuff. Thanx again.
person rammstein
schedule February 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Aww, man. This just rocks so freaking much. If I ever figure out how to add stuff to recs, I'll be adding this. :)
person Arnet¨ é
schedule February 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
The idea of a submissive Karl is a very hot one indeed. Good idea and so far, good execution. Hope you update soon.
person Rainien
schedule February 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You're doing a great job with this. Nice and hot. *S* I'm keeping my eye on this one.