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for Life's Path

by Elfgirl69

person Tal
schedule March 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon!!!! I keep checking, to no avail. I may have withdrawals.
person Talasi
schedule March 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
What a great chapter! I like how she gets self conscious and messes up when he is around. Demonstrates the tension between them. How appropriate that they would rescue each other. I'm sure Haldir knows how skilled she is, but perhaps he is too stubborn to understand the reason for her messing up. Seems both think the other has no idea how much they yearn for them. Please update soon! I am a Haldir worshiper.

Talasi
person Tal
schedule February 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Excellent story. That March Warden needs a spanking for not listening to his heart (or at least his elfood) he he. Please update soon!!
person Peral
schedule February 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very good! Got plot. i like plot. Can you write more?
person Ambur
schedule February 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Excellentpterpters. Very well written. The plot flows smoothly and you leave us chomping at the bit for it to continue! Gret job and I look forward to more. Thanks for sharing with us!

AmBur
person HHS
schedule February 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm wondering that Orophin's the only one not trying to get in her pants.I thought Haldir would be better than that.
person Gin
schedule February 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story. Cant wait for chapter 4
person aimless
schedule February 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh! A story with my 3 favorite brothers! Haldir, Orophin, and Rumil. Great start to the story and very good characterizations. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. All I can say is More, More, More! I hope you update soon because I will be checking back often. There are too few Haldir Het fics out there and I am glad I found yours. Keep up the excellent work!
Peace,
Amy
person aimless
schedule February 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I also wanto mto mention that it would be a shame if you got discouraged from updating from the lack of reviews. I believe it is kind of rude to read someones hard work and not even bother to leave a sentence or 2. Even if you do not like a fic if it is done constructively, feedback is most always appreciated by the author. Too few of the fanfic authors that I have talked to post simply for the pleasure of it. Most of them wait for feedback and threaten not to finish the story. I just wanted you to know that I appreciate your effort and I do hope you finish this even if no one else bothers to review. Good Luck and hopefully I will be hearing more from you in the future.
Peace,
AMy