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for Elrohir's Dilemma

by cathankitten

person red_lasbelin
schedule September 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi! I would like to tell you that I really like your story and was wondering if you were planning on continuing it. Bye!
person tink
schedule August 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a really great story! It was very funny and I just loved the part when Elrond and Elrohir helped to bath him. And if you would add the smut in the bath with Elrond I will love you forever! I think that there is nothing more sexy than pairing Elrond with one or both of the twins...
person aCharmedOne
schedule May 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey that's realy great. Hope you will soon go on with it. I like the idea of possessed hair but it's a bit ... i don't know how to discribe it. It#s boring at times. Not boring like i'm ready to sleep any moment it's more an sometime lengthines. I hope you don't understand this wrong i like this story and it's idea i realy do. I think you must search for an beta. If you find no one ... you can ask me. I'm maybe not perfekt myself but but sometimes it helps if a second person ready what you writes.

so take care and write mor Please!

aCharmedOne
person Mawgy
schedule February 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hmmmm, interesting. Unique plot too (always something I admire).

If you want, I'll beta it. Though my life has a been a bit hectic lately, so I don't know how long it'll take me to get it back to you. My e-mail is said above, next to my name.

Anyway, yeah, I think there definitely needs to be some smut going on (mainly 'cos I'm addicted to Elf sex. *g*) But, I'll go for the twins and Elrond when they are in the tub. Though I will settle for the twins when in Elladan's bed.

Anyway, let me know if you want me to beta it for you or not. And, I'd really like to see some hot, steamy incest in this fic. (If only to bring the story content up to the NC-17 rating you gave it).

Luv Mawgy
person Mawgy
schedule February 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Sorry, my e-mail wasn't placed above. Anyway, it's mawgy@yahoo.com
person tina
schedule February 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh yes.Please some sex between the twins.I love this two brothers.