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February 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love it, its too short though, MORE!!!! please :-)
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December 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I usually don't like Mary-Sue fics but yours is really beautiful! Very good!
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May 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Aw...
this was amazing!
Just... perfect! Soo... breathtaking!!!
ok,... one of my most liked fantasies... but wow... ver ywell described... very well indeed!
this was amazing!
Just... perfect! Soo... breathtaking!!!
ok,... one of my most liked fantasies... but wow... ver ywell described... very well indeed!
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March 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
omg. this really made me blush.. :) it was just too easy to imagine yourself under elijah.. and that ' elijah frowned' thingie is SO ic.. i loved it. write more!
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February 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow ... like someone else said, I think I might have been thinking about something like this myself :) Great story, keep it up!
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February 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
this is a good story. for some reason orli/elijah make a good pairing and adding a little female pov is always great. ^_^
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February 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, it was kind of sweet. Though I still prefer HP slash... You're pretty good writer, I mean REALLY good! Congrats!
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January 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Get out of my dreams! :) Seriously, I was thinking about something similar to this earlier. It's quite good. More fuel for the fantasy fire. Thanks!
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December 7, 1919 at 12:00 AM
This is very good! I try to stay away from Mary Sues but s thi this one is Elijah/Orlando (I LOVE ELIJAH/ORLANDO!!!) and they rarely pop up, I just had to read this. I'm very glad you made it 'She' and 'Her'. Gave me goosebumps. I seriously felt like I was the only one in the world who would rather watch them go at it instead of imaging me with etiher one. Joining in is nice too. =^.^= VIVA LA SLASH!!