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for Always Be Here

by dawnenab

person Danni
schedule March 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awww I love this story! I'm glad baby opened up to Orlando, I really hope she is reconsidering. They are soooo sweet together. Hope your okay too, keep us updated on how you are!

Danni xxx
person Marla
schedule March 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awww...I'm so happy that she finally told him. I can't tell you enough how good this story is. Can't wait for the next chapter!
person Lini
schedule March 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ok Ali, you're making me stay up way past my bedtime just to keep reading your stuff! I hope you're ok and are finding a good new place to live. I like this style. I like this story. I see the influence of Dallas in that one chapter!!!! :P Can't wait to read more of it, it's really good reading. Take care, dear.
person Danni
schedule February 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad she decided to open up to him. I hope she makes up her mind and they get together. Another great chapter, especially the snuggling bit at the end. lol I'm a hopeless romantic.
schedule February 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
"I think uld uld tell the man that I sacrifice kittens and puppies by the light of the full moon and he’d just shrug and say ‘To each their own, luv’." I just about choked on my coffee reading this Ali! Too funny. Fantastic part this - I'm glad Adriana has come clean about 'John' and now I'm really keen to read this scene from Orlando's point of view. *sigh* I can tell I'll be forced to k evk everyday for updates!

Marie :-)
person Rainien
schedule February 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Where can I get my own Orlando Bloom body pillow? I'd also like to place an order for an Elijah body pillow and Viggo body pillow. LOL Different moods require different pillows, ya know. *S*
person Marla
schedule February 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
The story gets better and better. What is Orli thinking?! Thats only gonna make Adriana upset and leave. This story is better than some of the soap operas I watch. LOL I can't wait for the next chapters!
person christie
schedule February 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I have been reading this story for a e noe now. I love the double posts to see both sides of the story. I love how the story is well thought out. Keep it up.
person Danni
schedule February 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
No Way. Orlando cannot bring her her woman out to morroco. How unfair would that be to baby? I hope she knocks some sense into him. Can't wait for the next update!
schedule February 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh man I got *three* chapters to read all a once - there is an upside to being too busy to check for updates! Ali I'm so enjoying the way this story is panning out. I LOVE the fact that Adrianna didn't just cave and say ok to Orli. And Orli, *snort* such a guy - jealous as hell one day, dumb as a hammer the next! I can just imagine how ugly things will get if this mystery woman actually does turn up. LOL I'll stop now before I get even more carried away! Please update again soon.

Marie :-)