rate_review Reviews

okay...read more chaps. just wanted to keep on reviewing intermittently instead of just one at the end of everything to tell you as much as i can remember. some of this stuff makes me laugh so much! her quips and everything...and him...he's just fabulous...especially in this story you've made! I get all giddy now...especially just after the kiss they shared when she got home from clubbing. the rose?! she wonders who the rose is for?! bloody heck, is she dense? hehe...really sweet story...one of my fave, if not my fave Orlando one. =) going off to read now...

just finished chapter 10....IT WAS A BLOODY DREAM!????!??!??!? dear god...going to read again now...i think *I* might need a cold shower after this, ali!

just finished chap 13...I love this boy even more now, and it sucks how she said no. it hurt reading chap12, her interpretation...but it KILLS reading how he took it. he's...just...the darling...sweet...bloke...he is...and...to see him (read him) hurt like that...*sigh*...that's why I'm here for him...hehehe...off to read again....and imma gonna kill ducks, whoever ducks is, haha....gonna read chapter 14 now... =)

just finished chapter 15. one more to go til i tell you to hurry up and update, hahaha. I LOVE ORLANDO, (as if everyone didn't know already), but i love him SO MUCH MORE in this fanfic and somehow hope to dear god that he's like this in real life! hehe...okay...off to read 16. =) (YOU ARE SUCH A TALENTED WRITER BY THE WAY...I love how you use two different points of view, and the fact that they're so unlike and REAL makes this story so much GREATER!)

read first four chaps...really sweet! I'm all giddy with Orlando...god i wish i were 'baby', though I would be less jerk-ish, hehe, i'd want him to stay forever *sigh* =)...imma continue reading now.

I love the two POV! You make it very interesting to read basically the same story twice... with hits of characters thrown in... its wonderful. Keep it up! Cant wait for an update!!!

EEEEEEEEEK!!!! moremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremore!!!!! NNOOOOOOO!!!! Must have more now!!!!! Seriously!! I'll start to go **twitch** insane**twitch** if you don't write more!!!!!!!!!EEEEEK!!

Wow how did I miss another update? *shrug* This story is just fantastic. I adore the alternating points of view because it's so true that two people can see the same situation in such different ways. I really think you have found a great 'voice' for both Adriana and Orlando - both of them seem very well rounded and not just flips sides of the same coin if you know what I mean. I'm pleased Adriana told Orli her story - he really needed to know where she was coming from. I hope he can made things 'alright' for them both. And I'm *so* looking forward to finding out just how the next 'holiday' week is spend! Please update again soon.

Marie :-)

I can't remember if I reviewed or not, but yeah.

I like it. Very very much. I think it's a very endearing story, and very well written (writtin? oh, it's late and I can't spell anyways).

I hope you update very soon. I shall just have to continue reading it over and over again.

Awww..I love Orli. I have a feeling it's still going to be a bumpy road ahead for them. I almost forgot about the phone call to his ex. Keep up the great work!