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May 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I read the whole story yesterday on my way home and I nearly missed my stop! I couldn't lay the story aside to do something else (like laundry, grocery shopping etc.)! I love it!! Please update soon, can't wait what happenend next!
And yes...uh, it's getting hot in here ;o)
Two thumps and ten toes up for you!
T.
And yes...uh, it's getting hot in here ;o)
Two thumps and ten toes up for you!
T.
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April 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!!! man you can write this was one of the best fanfics I've read in a long time and thank heavens for that! I was completely intangled with this story and just couldn't stop reading it. I have to tell you that I picture Olando the same way you do so that made it very easy to read and enjoy it. I can't wait till there is more email me the second you add the next chapter! Again thank you for this story you have talent!
Dark Vamp
Dark Vamp
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April 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
A/N: Don’t think for one minute that this story is over. Far from it…
Thank goodness for that! My GOD this chapter was soo hot. I just *cannot* wait to read iit from Orlando's point of view. Yummy! Please update again soon.
Marie :-)
Thank goodness for that! My GOD this chapter was soo hot. I just *cannot* wait to read iit from Orlando's point of view. Yummy! Please update again soon.
Marie :-)
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April 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Squeeeee! That was an awesome chapter. I'm so glad she finally let him in her heart...I can't wait to read his side of it! You're a great writer..keep up the great work!
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April 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Finally! Yay!!!!! And so beautifully written, I just sat back and sighed at the end...only in stories is it ever so perfect, but I suppose that's why we have works of fiction. On a different note: in the beginning, there wasn't much paparrazzi around, I'm confused as to where they came from. Did ducks lead them there?
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April 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am so happy that they finally had sex! Yeah!!! She finally did it......I am so proud of her and Orlando......so sweet and erotic.......I want another chapter!!! Please!
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April 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
dawne!!!!
you don't want to know how long i've waited for your update! haha...goodness...why do you write Orlando so well...of course I'm in love with him to begin with...but this story...it just wants me to change my name to Adriana....haha. and thank god it isn't over...i know ducks isn't out of the picture yet...but finally....finally...they can express to each other how they feel!
wonderful job writing this chapter...and the way you wrote the intimate scene was really good too.
continue! for the love of all that is good...please continue! =)
you don't want to know how long i've waited for your update! haha...goodness...why do you write Orlando so well...of course I'm in love with him to begin with...but this story...it just wants me to change my name to Adriana....haha. and thank god it isn't over...i know ducks isn't out of the picture yet...but finally....finally...they can express to each other how they feel!
wonderful job writing this chapter...and the way you wrote the intimate scene was really good too.
continue! for the love of all that is good...please continue! =)
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April 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wee! Cant wait for another update!
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April 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Fina-frickin-ly!!
I was so excited you updated that I couldn't even wait until after work.
It was so wonderful I'm so happy she forgave him and they got together. You're such a great writer I love it!
I was so excited you updated that I couldn't even wait until after work.
It was so wonderful I'm so happy she forgave him and they got together. You're such a great writer I love it!
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April 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Alright, while rereading this for the umpteenth time (because you haven't updated *cough*) I finally remembered to tell you something I wanted to say the first time around.
I LOVE that you have Liz disgusted with getting off the plane on the tarmac, it's such a cute difference from Baby. A very nice touch I think.
Anyways. Yeah, just reminding you that you have loyal readers that are waiting impatiently for you to update. Happy Easter.
I LOVE that you have Liz disgusted with getting off the plane on the tarmac, it's such a cute difference from Baby. A very nice touch I think.
Anyways. Yeah, just reminding you that you have loyal readers that are waiting impatiently for you to update. Happy Easter.