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for Always Be Here

by dawnenab

person Rainien
schedule July 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*snorts* Somebody obviously pissed in her Post Toasties this morning.

Ali, you just take your time. *Some* of us can be patient, as well as polite. *glares at rude reviewers*

Good to know you're getting settled again and that the next chapter is in the works. Chin up, darlin'. Your fans are behind you.
person Vilya
schedule July 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I loved that! That's probably my favorite chapter yet. I can't wait for more!
person Valerie
schedule June 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely loving this story!

I hope you update soon, this is very good.

Must thank a friend for recommending me to read this story.

Keep it up!

Oh and can I say hot sex scene right there! Hehehe!
person Maria
schedule June 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It's a great fan fiction! It's very well written and I love how we get the story from Adriana's and Orlando' POV. Please, keep writing and update soon. I can't wait for the next chapter!

Maria xoxo
schedule June 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm dieing for the next chapter. I hope it's soon, because it has been far far too long. So next time, when you're deciding between real life and writing this, just know that I'm out here, waiting for the next chapter of your story. No, really, I understand that real life is important, but don't forget about poor Baby and Orlando Bloom!
schedule May 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ali, please, please, please come back and update this wonderful tale! I think I'm on my third re-read and I'm DYING to know where we go from here.

Marie :-)
person Wanderer
schedule May 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well, I was going to review once I got to the last written chapter, but I had to say something now....Chapter 10, I think? SO NOT RIGHT. Here I was...getting into the (finally) much needed nookie scene...and BAM! just a dream. you are evil incarnate.

heh heh heh LOVE IT
schedule May 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm dieing to hear the rest of this story. I know you have a life and all, but a month is a long time to wait to finish a story. Please please PLEASE update soon.
person Satine
schedule May 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Its so good please write more
person Talasi
schedule May 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*fans self profusely* Unable......to.....form....coherent.............thoughts. This better not be a dream. I would hate to resort to violence against your person from frustratin. lol It seems to have gotten very hot in here.

That aside, The POV changes were very interesting....to see what their different reactions to the same thing were. Very hot. Funny.

*Sigh* Off to bed to work on some more dreams. alasalasi