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March 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great job.
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February 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I've just found this story and read it right from the beginning, and it's excellent - I really like the way both characters' thoughts are communicated, and the way you tell the story without just having them jump straight into bed. Although that was great when it finally happened! Can't wait for you to post more chapters.
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February 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
My favorite real person story. It gets you hooked in the beginning and doesn't let go. Can't wait to read more.
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February 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey.. I love this story! Write more soon okay? It's SO sweet! HAHA.
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December 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
What an excellent story! I was captured from word one! lol Don`t be discouraged, i get reviews like that too sometimes but you have to learn to just ignore them. I hope life is easier for you hun, *hug* update when you can but always take care of yourself.Remember, its just a story. lol It`s not going anywhere :D
Maeg
Maeg
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December 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
good job
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October 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to say that I am REALLY enjoying your story...I mean the story-line itself holds it own (something rare) outside of "fun" happening within the story. Anyway, please keep up the great work, its apprecd byd by many I am sure-at least it is by me!
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October 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey, don't worry about it. I am willing to wait for a year for your updates (just try not to tak e THAT long...haha). Just ignore people like that okay? Love your story!
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September 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
What can I say - save that you've got me hooked. I love your character description and storyline and changing POVs. The refenence to the Fire and Ice rose and Adriana's personality reminds me of another song - "Fire and Ice" by Garth Brooks. I know it's country, but it fits her perfectly.
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September 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i love the story and how it has what both of them are thinking.