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"But so anxious was Legolas to store up uch uch of his Elf-knight’s loving as possible that, on the eve of the warrior’s departure, he recklessly took the risk of being seen by the wrong people at the wrong time and in the wrong place and spent the entire night with his lover in one of the inns of Minas Tirith itself."

Yes Arwen I'd say there is a lot going on that you don't know about! God I love this story | ^_~ |

Marie

To Aelin-uial,
I don't consider it a silly nitpick from a compulsive proof-reader at all. Why should I when I used to work as one? A proof-reader, I mean. :) I use the word "plains" in a figurative sense not a literal one. You know, as in the hills and valleys and slopes and clefts of one's body. But if it is distracting then I can switch occasionally to "planes." And, no, the series isn't anywhere near the end since I've got 10 parts to go covering them as a couple for a change. Hope you'll stick around for those. Thanks for the suggestion and the lovely feedback. It's much appreciated.

regards,
Eresse

One word: wonderful

huggs
louise ;)

Aha! The mystery of Elr'sr's timely arrival when Legolas was assaulted is revealled! This is just prove that the bond between them keeps getting stronger. I liked this chapter, a little breather between the emotion filled chapters.
Elladan's remark about Arwen's fierceness made me laugh :)

he called him Melethron.. i love this.. great please write more.. thank you

Ahhh, about time Legolas gave in !!! He's so lucky Elrohir loves him so much! I can't tell you how much I have enjoyed your wonderfuly written story! You truly have a talent.
Thank you
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Ahhhh, I must have read that last paragraph a dozen times! Beautiful, Eresse, well done!
I had hoped that Elrohir wasn't going to do something stupid and turn him away! I eagerly wait to see how Aragorn and Arwen react!

Oh my God! YAY! I love this! Great Job! I love Legolas, and I absolutely love how Legolas came back, and Elrohir excepted him.... Please write more soon.. thank you thank you thank you

I don't think anyone could have written this chapter better than you did. Your story is so balanand and I think only somebody who really loves another can appreciate the torment going through a beloved. Legolas knows how lucky he is becuase Elrohir stillaccepted him but Elrohir, on the other hand, is the only one who can know the depth of Leoglas' love for him because he is the only one who has endured the archer's fear of giving in to love, but finally risking his heart to that which he feared most. I guess there must still be some sort of closure for them -- the binding thing that Elrohir did not know Legolas had already figured out, and the "royal family" who meant well but were just--- clueless? he-he, I want Arwen to bite her tongue.

I came in on this tale here in Part 20, and now find myself simultaneously reading from the very beginning, while eagerly looking for the latest update. Legolas and the twins were never a favorite pairing of mine, but I am totally engrossed in this lush romantic tale. The quality of writing is high, Elrohir is a fully realized character, and the story is almost lyrical in parts. Well done!