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person Anita
schedule January 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh yeah Legolas!! You better know that you are being hunted *bg* I really like the outcome of the chapter like this, a very heated kiss but promises for the next meeting! Keep writing.
person viewerv
schedule January 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Aragorn!!!! Didn't see that coming?
person MJLuvsPolar
schedule January 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Eressë,

I was going to wait until a few mohapthapters had been posted before I started this, *really* I was, but I'm going slightly batty waiting for updates and I bet I'm not the only one *looks around at all the other G&I Junkies er... Devoties* - so here is what I propose...

I will keep Hallmark.com busy sending you inspirational (and okay probably slightly annoying) e-cards each and everyday, if you will gift us with 2 chapters each update. Pleeeeeease *insert childish whine* I KNOW you have the parts! Pretty please with sugar on top? Hmm, well I'll stop - for now - but you might want to go check you're e-mail now. *EG* Ta muchly.

Marie
person jamie
schedule January 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
“You will be mine, Legolas. I think you know that.”

Woohoo!!! You go elrohir!!! Can almost see his sly smile when he said that! Wonderful chap as usual!!!
person Mel
schedule January 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
NOW we're getting somewhere! I honestly did notpectpect Legs falling for "Ear a corn" :-) How on EARTH could he even look at him when he's had Elrohir droolin' over him for centuries! He really needs someone to POP him upside his head. I'm hoping that maybe it was a simple explination, like "somethingAragAragorn reminded me of you Elrohir, and I've SO missed your arms around me" (**sigh**)

“I love you, Calenlass nîn,” (Oh, be still my heart!)
"Legolas became aware of the no long hidden desire in Elrohir’es. es. He felt a shiver pass through his body." (Mine, too)
“We-we nearly lost you?!” he gasped in near horror. (Well, DUH!)
"Legolas was shocked by the sudden thrill that ran through his limbs." "Unthinkingly, he responded and with that response found powerful arms enclosing him. " (Lucky Legolis - yes, I'm so jealous)
"He struggled for lucidity and, finding it, pulled away with a ragged gasp." (How could he not!)
"Legolas saw the light in Elrohir’s argent eyes." "“You will be mine, Legolas. I think you know that.” (YES YES YES)
"But he could sense the eyes of Elrohir upon him and the sensation made him feel like a cornered stag at a hunt in Greenwood. " (There's no getting out of this one Leggo!)


I'm still hoping that AFTER Legolis "gets a clue" and binds to Elrohir, Elladen (or DAD) will POP him in the head and tell him "IT's about time, ya big pointy-eared knucklehead!"

I LOVE this story. Can't wait for the next chapter :-)
person Kirui
schedule January 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
FINALLY, we're getting somewhere! :D Can't tell you how utterly _relieved_ I was when I read Elrohir's declaration to Legolas and his promise to himself? or to the Prince? that he'd stop denying them both. gyah. ::melts:: Beautiful style and story telling as usual. The complete perfection of it all makes me sick. Really. n___________n Glad to see the forward movement!
person Kirui
schedule January 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
.......... and my apologies for spamming this review just because I noticed rather belatedly that I miss-typed my own email address. :P
person louise_oblique
schedule January 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Firstly:'Estel'!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! and secondly: 'made him feel like a cornered stag at a hunt in Greenwood.' Someone is at last going hunting, yippeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!! *grins, giggles and blushes* *does da AT AT LAST :) Hope little greenleaf is receptive, more please. god this is so well written!!!! fantastic and me very hooked *line and sinker* ;)

huggs
louise
person Shanastay
schedule January 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OY OY OY!!!!!! MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I am SO losing it! They are SO close! Smack Leggy for me please?
person Nina
schedule January 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Amazing chapter! I hope Legolas can realize very soon how much he really cares for Elrohir.