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Gosh! I didn't see that one coming at all, didn't expect such a reaction from L. Silly that his brain cannot register that El would never ever cause him heartbreak, sheesh!

Anyway, this heart rending chapter is by far one of your best written chapters yet. Describing the warring thoughts and emotions that coursed through Legolas's heart and mind was not an easy feat, but you linked everything so effortlessly! From the s enc encroaching binding-call to L's welling up of unfounded defences. Your writing leaves me speechless once more, you indeed have a priceless gift!

Thanks again for your wonderful storytelling!

I have just finished reading the whole story thus far - it's wonderful! You write beautifully, and the characters are consistent throughout - unfortunately, in this last chapter... I was just thinking Legolas was overdue for retreating! *sigh* I don't want to hit him, because I feel desperately sorry for his fear. I just hope ELrohir remains patient and understanding!
Thank you for sharing this marvellous story. Zoe

*thud*

There. See? I *knew* it was coming. Frankly I'm sused sed that Legolas hasn't had a panic attack before now. So Eresse, am I getting this right when I say that Legolas is really scared of the unknown? Having never loved he's fixated on the worst case senario and just gotten into the habit of staying in his safety zone? God I just *hate* the thought of Elrohir getting hurt yet again but I fear things can only get worse; if this is the way Legolas reacts to the significance of a ring, I dread to think what will happen when he finds out Elrohir is actually *bonded* to him. What a mess.

Mantra time I think: 'they make it in the end, they make it in the end, they make it in the end...' (sure hope my sanity is intact to realize it.)


Marie :_(

I am SO gonna beat the tar outta Lego. If he breaks Ro's heart I'm gonna go nuts! Well done. You're killing me waitng for updates.

Oh my god, Legolas is an absolute IDIOT!!! Trying to restrainelf elf from throwing dignity out the window and start banging my head on the keyboard, but..... Even in the face with devotion such as Elrohir's and Legolas STILL wants to go hermit himself? ::frustrated growl:: Stupid 3000+ years worth of paranoia....... ::bangs head on keyboard::

I just read the whole story. It's beautiful...and scary. The way you describe Legolas and his way of thinking in the last chapter is like you would write about me. Anyways...I love your story and hope for a happy ending.

Hmmm, did anyone see them making out in front of the window before they moved to the bed? Maybe being discovered would push Legolas to one extreme or the other - he'd either scurry back to Ithilien or be forced to defend Elrohir and in doing so, realise how much he really cares. The thing I'm looking forward to is finding out how Legolas will react when he learns that Elrohir has bound himself to the prince. Will he be really touched or mad as hell? I can imagine him being very angry that Elrohir had the opportunity to ask for advice, gather some support and weigh his options before making his decision, but that he (Legolas) wasn't given the opporty tty to ask Elrond or Gandalf for their counsel, he had no input into the decision and nobody's going to be happy with him if he rejects Elrohir.
Of course on the other hand, I don't want the story to end too soon because I'm enjoying it so much. Good work!

After the bout of very thorough loving done in this chapter I wanted to jump uo and down; for Legolas finally understood what Elrohir's feeling were. At the end of the chapter I wanted to jump up and down because someone had to interuptolasolas' rather fearfull thoughts.
So, a good job once more with this chapter...and wow already two nc-17 pieces in one part :) you must love us!!

Been reading this since the beginning but had been so lazy to review. Sorry! Had have been enjoying thogreogression of this story tremendously. Am so glad that you update your fic so often. In fact I have been coming in everyday to see if you have a new update. I just have to review this time cause I want to smack Legolas on the head! Argh! As much as I love Legolas, he's really an idiot!!!!! Argh! Will it take losing Elrohir before Legolas realises his folly? How long more must Elrohir suffer? My heart really goes out to Elrohir for suffering such a fool! Argh!

::sighs happily:: I love this story. I've been sick and home from school since wednesday and have been living off of it and I must say, it's a great way to stave off boredom! I love Legolas and the twins have always been favored characters to me. Something about those Elves...:) I'm also very very happy that I found your account on AdultFanFiction.net. I had been frequenting the Library of Moria but the story isn't nearly as far and just in case if you don't already know...the lastest chapter you posted there isn't working. I'm not sure if that's a glitch of my own computer or if it's a broken link. Anyway you should know...so like I said before, love love sto story, you could say I'm addicted, and I can't wait for the next installment.
Have a great day! :)
-Hannah