rate_review Reviews

This is a wonderful series, both in story and literary structure. I find myself drawn into the storyline so deeply that I want to throttle Legolas. I can't wait for the update.

Break! Break! Break! No matter the hurt that Elrohir faces now, it'll be better in the long run. Better than to face a wavering Legolas that will turn on him anything and constantly uses another man to measure him by. The bleakness that Legolas faces is merely a tiny fraction of what Elrohir is facing. *sigh*

OMG! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! THis can't be happening! Go and run after him you stupid dunce head! Argh! Another excellent chapter. I also enjoyed the little side thing where they caught the traitors. Very cool. That's my ELly. |^_^|

Well, that's just rude! You'd think a prince would have enough manners to thank Elrohir for saving his life. Up to this point I've been sympathetic to Legolas - if you don't return someone's feelings, you can't make yourself love them, however much you might want to. But after reading this chapter I must saat iat if I was Elrohir, I'd have smacked Leggy's head against the wall a few times and just left him there.
How did Elrohir know Legolas was in trouble? Was it through the bond?
Once again, I'm really enjoying your work, and thank you for updating on a daily basis.

Poor Elrohir! can't legolas see that if they break up both will suffer?

At first I thought it was a spy of the councillers or something that was sneaking away when Arwen and Legolas talked. But it was Elrohir...I am not sure if I like that better though. I belisomesome miracle has to happen now for Legolas to get Elrohir back. The prince is not happy now that he has driven the other away, maybe this is enough for him to overcome his fear and take the leap of loving Elrohir completely.
Keep writing, 'cause I am still reading :)

'Why then did it feel so bleak?' Hmmm dunno,coz you love him you idiot.Gods,what an irritating blonde elf.
When is he gonna see?

WHY???Damn it Leggy!Make a decision now!!!

I don't hate Legolas. I understand that he's frightened and acting defensively. I like him enough (you've developed him well enough) I accept that this is not an intrinsic character flaw in him, and that he (like everyone) makes terrible mistakes every once in a while.

I don't believe in revenge. I don't think anything's gained when one suffers just for the sake of suffering. When suffering leads to wisdom and understanding and persogrowgrowth, that's a good. When suffering comes from appreciating all the hurt and pain that one inflicted on another, and then *that* leads to understanding and growth, that's even better.

In short, I really hope that Legolas... "grows a lot". Get me? ;-)

And be merciful, update quickly! I'm dyin' here!

I’ve read the story from the beginning but never reviewed. It’s the first time and it’s not going to be nice, I LOVE the story but right now it’s just plane boring. Even a blind can see that Legolas loves Elrohir so why can’t you finally end the subject and continue with them being together ?maybmaybe you have no ideas anymore and that’s why you keep writing the same stuff over and over again ?