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June 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I was really curious about your story, i just read up 20 chapters, something i never do. But your story is really credible. i think it's one of the best rape related stories i've read.
I've been a rape victim myself & was in the same position, nobody wanted to believe me when i said who it was, and i think you portrayed the fegs rgs really well. It's really good and i hope you update soon :)
I've been a rape victim myself & was in the same position, nobody wanted to believe me when i said who it was, and i think you portrayed the fegs rgs really well. It's really good and i hope you update soon :)
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June 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Boy am I glad I found this. I am loving this! Even though I'm normally a fellowship girl. This is terrific, can't wait for the next episode. More power to your elbow!! Please let me know if you have written anything else
cheers
Ysolde
ps I normally hate Mpreg stories!
cheers
Ysolde
ps I normally hate Mpreg stories!
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June 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
more please! you can't stop there now i'm worried.so far i love the way you write keep going.
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May 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
love the updates!
great story
great story
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May 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please, more now!! I LOVE this story!! I love the characterizations and I can't wait to see what happens.
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May 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I disagree with daghterofthemidnightmoon. It would be out of sorts for Erestor to bond with his child as soon as it's born. Glorfindel is another matter though. I can see him instantly falling in love with the newborn. Helping Erestor bond with the child would give them more time to finite thier own bond and come to terms with their feelings for eachother.
One of your earlier chapters had me concerned about how you would portray Lady Galadriel. I'm glad to see that she isn't dead set against Erestor due to his crush on her son-in-law. She may not be on his side but she's not on anyone else's yet either.
Please update soon. Next week would be good. (hint, hint)
One of your earlier chapters had me concerned about how you would portray Lady Galadriel. I'm glad to see that she isn't dead set against Erestor due to his crush on her son-in-law. She may not be on his side but she's not on anyone else's yet either.
Please update soon. Next week would be good. (hint, hint)
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May 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
If you love me and I know you do...you will quickly update! I've been waiting forever, pleasepleaseplease update...I wanna know how did Galadriel find out about what was going on and does she really knows if Erestor is telling the truth. I swear Thranduil's wife sounds like a bitch, well everyone has been mean and cruel to Erestor. The only thing the he did was tell how he gotten pregnant.
Excellent! Can't wait for the next chapter, please update soon.
Nemesis ^_~
Excellent! Can't wait for the next chapter, please update soon.
Nemesis ^_~
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May 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh. My. God. Where the *heck* have you been?! I almost had myself consigned to the fact that you may have discontinued this fic. I was about to cry. But then you updated! (which made me happy then!) And not just a one chapter update, but a three! Happiness all around! But what took you so long?! Ok ok... I know I might not have been the most loyal of reviewers for the last couple chapters, but I am swear to mend my ways and review every single chapter from now on if you promise to not keep us waiting for an update so long again! I mean it! I will send my hordes of mini balrogs after you if you do that again!
But anyway oh what an update! I was so happy to see Erestor finally opening up to Glorfindel, even ift a t a little bit. I am though pleased to see tha Glorfindel decided to give Erestor fighting lessons. I was kinda waiting for him to do something like that. And Elrond... Oh I swear I could knock that elf over the head!!! I was so amused to see Erestor starting to kinda get a slightly more snippy attitude with are pain the ass elf lord. I laughed at some of the lines Glorfindel and Erestor greeted him with when he came for his "weekly probbing" How funny... ^_^
But oh no! Not only are Galadriel and celeborn finally here, but also Thranduil and whatever his wife's name is! This can't be good. And poor Erestor went into labor!!!! I hope Elladan will be able to find Glorfindel in time! Why do I get a feeling that Figwit's misplacing of Erestor's male childbearing book will somehow play an important part in later chapters?
But what about Erestor's child? This is the big question... I'm not sure how you're going to end this, but I'm still saying it should be Legolas and a big case of mistaken identity like I know I ranted about in some previous review of mine... I'd kinda be disappointed if Thranduil really was the father. I just hope you don't have Erestor actually lying about his e pre predicament, though I doubt it... By the way he's been acting, I think he really was raped. Please please PLEASE don't have Erestor be lying. Make Legolas the culprit and Glorfindel rip his heart out!!!! Sorry... got a little carried away there...
Anyway, yes. Please don't let Erestor be lying about him getting raped. And i still say (hint hint wink wink) that there should be the *whole* scene with erestor starting to fade after the baby is finally born and Glorfindel out of his love for our fallen councilor bonds with Erestor to save him. That would make me so happy. ^_^ I just hope Galadriel figures things out. And whenever she finds out the truth, gives Elrond the beating of his life for treating Erestor like he has!!!!!!
As you can see, I've done a lot of brooding over this story because I like it so frickin much!!!! Please update soon!!!! I'm dying to find out what happens!!!! (And don't forget all my little suggestions ^_^ ... sorry sorry... shameless plea I know but sometimes I juist can't help myself :P) Anyway, update update UPDATE!!!!! Oh! And please let Erestor love his child once it's born. That would just break my little heart if it's born and he refuses to accept it as his son/daughter m rom rooting for a boy!!!! Don't ask my why!) I could see him as being a very protective father. I think after his child's born his parental instincts will finally kick in and he'll love that baby with everything he has. Something like the last saving light in his dark world right now... I think Erestor, the baby, and Glorfindel would make such a cute little family!!!
Oh please for the love of all things holy in heaven update soon!!!! I'm already desperate for an update and I just got a three chapter one. Hurry hurry hurry! PLEASE!!! Before I go insane with impatience!!!
Well, I guess this thing's long enough now, so I'll leave you with this. Hopefully this had somehow made up for all those other chapters I didn't review. Good luck and don't forget... UPDATE SOON!!! ^_^
-daughterofthemidnightmoon
But anyway oh what an update! I was so happy to see Erestor finally opening up to Glorfindel, even ift a t a little bit. I am though pleased to see tha Glorfindel decided to give Erestor fighting lessons. I was kinda waiting for him to do something like that. And Elrond... Oh I swear I could knock that elf over the head!!! I was so amused to see Erestor starting to kinda get a slightly more snippy attitude with are pain the ass elf lord. I laughed at some of the lines Glorfindel and Erestor greeted him with when he came for his "weekly probbing" How funny... ^_^
But oh no! Not only are Galadriel and celeborn finally here, but also Thranduil and whatever his wife's name is! This can't be good. And poor Erestor went into labor!!!! I hope Elladan will be able to find Glorfindel in time! Why do I get a feeling that Figwit's misplacing of Erestor's male childbearing book will somehow play an important part in later chapters?
But what about Erestor's child? This is the big question... I'm not sure how you're going to end this, but I'm still saying it should be Legolas and a big case of mistaken identity like I know I ranted about in some previous review of mine... I'd kinda be disappointed if Thranduil really was the father. I just hope you don't have Erestor actually lying about his e pre predicament, though I doubt it... By the way he's been acting, I think he really was raped. Please please PLEASE don't have Erestor be lying. Make Legolas the culprit and Glorfindel rip his heart out!!!! Sorry... got a little carried away there...
Anyway, yes. Please don't let Erestor be lying about him getting raped. And i still say (hint hint wink wink) that there should be the *whole* scene with erestor starting to fade after the baby is finally born and Glorfindel out of his love for our fallen councilor bonds with Erestor to save him. That would make me so happy. ^_^ I just hope Galadriel figures things out. And whenever she finds out the truth, gives Elrond the beating of his life for treating Erestor like he has!!!!!!
As you can see, I've done a lot of brooding over this story because I like it so frickin much!!!! Please update soon!!!! I'm dying to find out what happens!!!! (And don't forget all my little suggestions ^_^ ... sorry sorry... shameless plea I know but sometimes I juist can't help myself :P) Anyway, update update UPDATE!!!!! Oh! And please let Erestor love his child once it's born. That would just break my little heart if it's born and he refuses to accept it as his son/daughter m rom rooting for a boy!!!! Don't ask my why!) I could see him as being a very protective father. I think after his child's born his parental instincts will finally kick in and he'll love that baby with everything he has. Something like the last saving light in his dark world right now... I think Erestor, the baby, and Glorfindel would make such a cute little family!!!
Oh please for the love of all things holy in heaven update soon!!!! I'm already desperate for an update and I just got a three chapter one. Hurry hurry hurry! PLEASE!!! Before I go insane with impatience!!!
Well, I guess this thing's long enough now, so I'll leave you with this. Hopefully this had somehow made up for all those other chapters I didn't review. Good luck and don't forget... UPDATE SOON!!! ^_^
-daughterofthemidnightmoon
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May 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am really enjoying this story at first I was not interested but as I read it I was really surprise. Can't wait for new chapters
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May 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
lovely
huggs
louise
huggs
louise