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August 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Go slap him again and again Galadriel!Serves Elrond right for not believing Erestot yot yet anyway.Go slap him again Galadriel!
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July 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG!
This chapter touched me sooo deeply!
The way Erestor finally went to his child nearly brought tears to my eyes!
*sniffle* Oh how beautifully written that scene with the child was! I loved it!
I love this story!
It's great and coming along brilliantly, I cannot WAIT for more! I want the truth out from the lips of Thranduil! What on earth is going on! lol.
Eagerly awaiting your next update!!!
This chapter touched me sooo deeply!
The way Erestor finally went to his child nearly brought tears to my eyes!
*sniffle* Oh how beautifully written that scene with the child was! I loved it!
I love this story!
It's great and coming along brilliantly, I cannot WAIT for more! I want the truth out from the lips of Thranduil! What on earth is going on! lol.
Eagerly awaiting your next update!!!
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July 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ie yoe your story so much! I keep waiting for the fact that the baby has green eyes to come up, but no one seemes to notice. Not that that's a sign that it was definately Thranduil who sired the child, but how many more elves with green eyes are there? I'd like to think it was Thranduil, and maybe he was so drunk he doesn't remember?
And the relationship between Legolas and Elrohir is creeping me out a little. Maybe its because Legolas is so pushy, but I keep getting the feeling he's going to push things a bit too far.
Oh, wait! I just had a thought! I may be totally off track here, but where was Legolas during the whole incident? Oooooh, that would be really creepy.
Anyway, can't wait 'til the next update! The anticipation is killing me!
And the relationship between Legolas and Elrohir is creeping me out a little. Maybe its because Legolas is so pushy, but I keep getting the feeling he's going to push things a bit too far.
Oh, wait! I just had a thought! I may be totally off track here, but where was Legolas during the whole incident? Oooooh, that would be really creepy.
Anyway, can't wait 'til the next update! The anticipation is killing me!
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July 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I still don't get it.Thranduil's wife knew he was the sire.Well,I like the baby's name.At least Glorfindel seems to be in Erestor's life for the long haul.
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July 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm kind of confused.Thranduil is not sure if he's the sire?
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July 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Okay, so now you have me scratching my head! Thranduil is innocent??? But I was cheering as Glorfindel realized he had been a fool! Erestor did forgive h lit little to easily, I would have made him grovel...Love thsi chapter, finally the pieces are coming together!!! Update soon, please
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July 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow! What an exciting chapter! The tension is mounting and will find its way out soon! I cannot wait for your next update!
For those who cannot understand let me point out a few things
1) Thranduil knows he COULD be the father. But I are hre he didn't believe it was rape at the time. Afterall, you can't rape the willing.
2) Belgor was obviously hired by Viresse to make sure EVERYONE believed Erestor was a liar.
3) Glorfindel acted like that because he believed Erestor. Believing that Belgor was the father royally pissed him off. It also might have something to do with that kiss they shared. I'd be mad if that happend to me.
4) Galadriel probably knows something isn't right but isn't sure. She probably doesn't want to voice her suspicions since Nenya is not with her and she isn't 100% sure.
For those who cannot understand let me point out a few things
1) Thranduil knows he COULD be the father. But I are hre he didn't believe it was rape at the time. Afterall, you can't rape the willing.
2) Belgor was obviously hired by Viresse to make sure EVERYONE believed Erestor was a liar.
3) Glorfindel acted like that because he believed Erestor. Believing that Belgor was the father royally pissed him off. It also might have something to do with that kiss they shared. I'd be mad if that happend to me.
4) Galadriel probably knows something isn't right but isn't sure. She probably doesn't want to voice her suspicions since Nenya is not with her and she isn't 100% sure.
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July 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Sorry for the long delay in reviwing, but for the last couple days I couldn't seem to access the site. I don't know if anyone else was having trouble getting on, but I sure was! I was just about to write a review and email it to you when the site finally started working again. So anyway, here I finally am! Sorry again about the delay.
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July 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Sorry for the long delay in reviwing, but for the last couple days I couldn't seem to access the site. I don't know if anyone else was having trouble getting on, but I sure was! I was just about to write a review and email it to you when the site finally started working again. So anyway, here I finally am! Sorry again about the delay.
Well, anyway, wow. Lots of stuff going on this chapter. So much, in fact, I'm not quite sure where to begin. I guess I'll just start will what was kind of bugging me that most this chapter: Erestor sure seems to be taking his good 'ol time fading, I can tell you that! How much time was this chapter suppose to take place after the birth? A week or so I think you said somewhere, but I may have to check that out again myself... I don't know, it just struck me as strange since where you left off in the last chapter what with Erestor finally starting the final stage of fading and had entered the last phase where death was almost starting to become an imminent thing. that's at least how it felt to me. He's a stubborn little elf it seems...
Aw! that one part where Glorfindel went to take the baby to see Erestor made my poor little heart begin to break! When he tried to touch the baby and it started to cry because he was so cold from the fading really touched me. Does Glorfindel suspect Erestor's fading or is he still mad because he thinks Erestor lied to him? I hope he figures things out soon and comes to our poor fading councilor's aide! He's almost gone! Which brings me (yet once again! ^_^) to my infamous plea... FADING SCENE!!!!!
Come on! I know you want to write a scene like that just as much as I want to read it! Doesn't Celeborn know he's fading? Surely he should talk to Glorfindel and get all this straightened out. I mean, our glorious Balrog Slayer can't keep ignoring Erestor forever. Before long he's going to have to step in and ave the poor elf and show him there is someone that cares about whether he lives or dies. Because no one else seems to be giving much of a damn about him right now!
Which brings me to another point. What's Galadriel been doing all this time? Spying? Surely even without her ring she should be able to see something's up with Thranduil's wife right now. (I'm sorry! But I can never remember her name!) And who's this Melcer? Someone else she's trying to use to further discredit Erestor and save Thranduil's reputation? The plot just keeps thickening...
And what does Thrnaduil seem to know that he's not telling anyone? And why was he glaring at Erestor? Because he knows that Erestor knows he's the rapist? Perhaps Thranduil was really having an affair with this Baglor that cflaims to be the father of Erestor's baby, and there was somekind of misunderstanding or cover up to keep the affair secret. Since the other elf has dark hair, perhaps Thranduil mistook Erestor for Baglor and this whole thing was like what I hypothezied before about with Legolas possibily being the rapist and this whole thing's nothing other thatn an out of control case of mistaken identity! What is Erestor was really covering for Thranduil this whole time about him and his affair? Ooooo... wouldn't Elrond feel like an ass aftering finding that out... Then everyone would HAVE to feel bad about how they treated poor Erestor through all this!
Ugh! I need to know what happens next! Is this going to have a happy ending? (or at least something that passes as one?) And once again what about this mysterious elf Thranduil's wife paying off? And what about Elrohir and Legolas? Are they somehow involved in all this? And what anout my fading scene? Or Erestor? Or Glorfindel? Or the baby? Or...
AHHHHH!!! So many questions! I need to know!!! Can you at least me me a hint if Glorfindel and Erestor are going to get together in the end? They'd make such a cute couple and family! Glorfindel already loves that baby as his own child! They need to get together!!!! Hurry up with this now! Posthaste! Please update soon and keep me from going insane! Hurry hurry hurry! Now now now!
till then
-daughterofthemidnightmoon
P.S. Hurry with the next ter ter soon or I'm going to send out my horde of mini-Balrogs after you! (And don't forget about that little fading scene we've been talking about... ^_^)
Well, anyway, wow. Lots of stuff going on this chapter. So much, in fact, I'm not quite sure where to begin. I guess I'll just start will what was kind of bugging me that most this chapter: Erestor sure seems to be taking his good 'ol time fading, I can tell you that! How much time was this chapter suppose to take place after the birth? A week or so I think you said somewhere, but I may have to check that out again myself... I don't know, it just struck me as strange since where you left off in the last chapter what with Erestor finally starting the final stage of fading and had entered the last phase where death was almost starting to become an imminent thing. that's at least how it felt to me. He's a stubborn little elf it seems...
Aw! that one part where Glorfindel went to take the baby to see Erestor made my poor little heart begin to break! When he tried to touch the baby and it started to cry because he was so cold from the fading really touched me. Does Glorfindel suspect Erestor's fading or is he still mad because he thinks Erestor lied to him? I hope he figures things out soon and comes to our poor fading councilor's aide! He's almost gone! Which brings me (yet once again! ^_^) to my infamous plea... FADING SCENE!!!!!
Come on! I know you want to write a scene like that just as much as I want to read it! Doesn't Celeborn know he's fading? Surely he should talk to Glorfindel and get all this straightened out. I mean, our glorious Balrog Slayer can't keep ignoring Erestor forever. Before long he's going to have to step in and ave the poor elf and show him there is someone that cares about whether he lives or dies. Because no one else seems to be giving much of a damn about him right now!
Which brings me to another point. What's Galadriel been doing all this time? Spying? Surely even without her ring she should be able to see something's up with Thranduil's wife right now. (I'm sorry! But I can never remember her name!) And who's this Melcer? Someone else she's trying to use to further discredit Erestor and save Thranduil's reputation? The plot just keeps thickening...
And what does Thrnaduil seem to know that he's not telling anyone? And why was he glaring at Erestor? Because he knows that Erestor knows he's the rapist? Perhaps Thranduil was really having an affair with this Baglor that cflaims to be the father of Erestor's baby, and there was somekind of misunderstanding or cover up to keep the affair secret. Since the other elf has dark hair, perhaps Thranduil mistook Erestor for Baglor and this whole thing was like what I hypothezied before about with Legolas possibily being the rapist and this whole thing's nothing other thatn an out of control case of mistaken identity! What is Erestor was really covering for Thranduil this whole time about him and his affair? Ooooo... wouldn't Elrond feel like an ass aftering finding that out... Then everyone would HAVE to feel bad about how they treated poor Erestor through all this!
Ugh! I need to know what happens next! Is this going to have a happy ending? (or at least something that passes as one?) And once again what about this mysterious elf Thranduil's wife paying off? And what about Elrohir and Legolas? Are they somehow involved in all this? And what anout my fading scene? Or Erestor? Or Glorfindel? Or the baby? Or...
AHHHHH!!! So many questions! I need to know!!! Can you at least me me a hint if Glorfindel and Erestor are going to get together in the end? They'd make such a cute couple and family! Glorfindel already loves that baby as his own child! They need to get together!!!! Hurry up with this now! Posthaste! Please update soon and keep me from going insane! Hurry hurry hurry! Now now now!
till then
-daughterofthemidnightmoon
P.S. Hurry with the next ter ter soon or I'm going to send out my horde of mini-Balrogs after you! (And don't forget about that little fading scene we've been talking about... ^_^)
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July 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG OMG OMG OMG!
THIS IS BRILLIANT - The tension, the suspense! It's killing me!!!
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!
*fans self* that was a GREAT chapter. Lovely length and filled with lots of stuff to keep me hanging for the next one!
^_^
GREAT work! Cannot WAIT for the rest...really, can't WAIT...*cough* hint *cough*.
*grin!* Loved it!
THIS IS BRILLIANT - The tension, the suspense! It's killing me!!!
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!
*fans self* that was a GREAT chapter. Lovely length and filled with lots of stuff to keep me hanging for the next one!
^_^
GREAT work! Cannot WAIT for the rest...really, can't WAIT...*cough* hint *cough*.
*grin!* Loved it!