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for Mani Marte? *complete*

by bluegold

person giggle
schedule February 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Except for thuit uit salad Erestor has to wear that was a nice chapter.
I think Glorfindel, Erestor and the elfling would make a lovely family.
Elven families must be very strange when it could easily be a hundred years or so between siblings. Tolkien didn't really discuss many children. It wasn't his thing, what he was trying to say in his story.
I look forward to more friendship between your two and then slowly even more. I like things to take time. giggle
person Wooster
schedule February 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like Erestor realizing that he has a friend on Glorfindel. And the visi the the tailor maybe would provide some clues to Glorfindel to find why Erestor has a blue robe and what happened that night, true? I know that we are overeager, upd update soon, please!!!
person Wooster
schedule February 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi, me again. I re-read the chapter and a few things didn't fit in, so I visit your site, and I found that there is a chapter missing in AFF.net. Chapter 6. Just for you to know.
person Amanda
schedule February 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Grrrr
What's a girl gotta do to get an update?
Pleeease?

If you udate then I'll try to make my next review a constructive one.
person Anon
schedule February 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, For the Love of All That's Greasy!
Please Update soon!
You don't know what I'm going through. I've become obsessed about checking this story for updates.
person Anon
schedule February 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh please continue this story. I'm dying to find out what happens.
person louise_oblique
schedule February 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You know what? This is EXCELLENT!!!!!!!!!!
please update soon

huggs
louise
person Tim
schedule February 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE WRITE MORE (now that i've calmed down) I think tha Elrond should get the butt in gear and fall far Erestor I lone Elrond/Erestor there is not enough in my opinion oh it was soo sweet that Glorfindel is sticking up for Erestor and why is it Thranduil is almoslwaylways shown in a bad light? oh well please do more and maby you could make the chapters a litte longer please PS Erestor has got the sexiest aura about him 'cause we know almst nothing about him good luck bye xxx
person Kleine Snowdrop
schedule February 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please please please don't make it Thranduil, he is not evil, please dont make him be the one to have raped, if it happened, Erestor! Please I am begging you, I love Thranduil he is one of my favorite characters, he is misunderstood by almost everyone and seems to have become the default bad guy, almost worse than Sauron. Please make it so that Erestor was drunk and doesnt remembe who the father is. Please not Thranduil, any one but him.
person Sian
schedule January 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
All Right! About time some told Elrond where to go and how to get there! Go Glory!!
Very nice story...
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