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by bluegold

person HHS
schedule February 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thank goodness that it was only a dream.
person daughterofthemidnightmoon
schedule February 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hurry with more soon! This is quickly starting to become one of my favorite stories. I feel so bad for Erestor. No one in the world that believes him or even really cares if he lives or dies (except for Glorfindel that is ^_^!!)... How sad... I just hope you're not planning to pull something at the very end and have Erestor actually be lying... That would be terrible. And exactly how much longer until the birth? Just wondering... Hurry with more soon!

-daughterofthemidnightmoon
person ria
schedule February 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh god, i feel so sorry for erestor, i am glade glorfindel is nice to him...
person HHS
schedule February 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I can't believe that Elrond is willing to sacrifice his friendship with Erestor by banishing him after he gives birth.As for Thranduil,unless he was really drunk and can't remember what he did(but that's no excuse for what happened),he's acting like a jerk.I hope that Glorfindel will continue to be Erestor's friend.
person BlueGold
schedule February 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
:D thanks for all the lovely reviews

Well I fixed the chapter mix up thanks for pointing it out I wouldn't have noticed! Yes well Elrond won't be getting any better soon.
person Wooster
schedule February 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wyou you really had me calling names to Elrond at the end of the chapter!!!! And I like soooo much Glorfindel coming in rescue of Erestor, giving him a chance for an undisturbed walk. Glorfindel rocks!!!!!
person louise_oblique
schedule February 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is absolutly brilliant!!!!!!!!!!!
;) nasty elrond though being so mean and trying to break erestor and glor's friendship, meant. i really love this fic
more please?

huggs
louise
person Amanda
schedule February 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
My constructive comment was going to be about there being a time lapse and missing information, b see see now that you are actually missing a chapter.

First, fix that.

Second, it would be nice to have a chapter where Elrond tells Thranduil about Erestor's accusations and read about his response unless you're waiting to use it for a climatic ending.

Either way, I'm still excited about this story and will be looking for another chapter over the weekend.
person louise_oblique
schedule February 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this fic

huggs
louise
person HHS
schedule February 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Okay,must be the prologue.When I read ch.6 at the yahoo site,it says ch.7.Go figure.BTW,Elrond's still a jerk!