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person HHS
schedule January 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Make Elrohir take charge and pursue Legolas now.Enough with the virtue or promises.Throw caution into the wind.I don't want Elrohir to suffer anymore heartbreaks.I think Legolas is just afraid to admit that he likes males.
person louise_oblique
schedule January 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YIPPEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!*bounces* fantastic can't wait for more

huggs
louise
person Rainien
schedule January 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Once again, well done. The ceremony left me with chill bumps. Too bad Arwen couldn't have benefitted from Gandalf's little secret; but, then again, I guess great love does not come without some form of sacrifice.

LOL And you didn't keep us waiting too long either! "I will cleave to Elvenkind." We didn't have to wait till the end of the chapter, which I very much feared would happen. I nearly jumped out of my chair cheering after that first line.
person Viewerv
schedule January 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
No heart break but I wonder how long Legolas and Elrohir will continue to beat around the bush.
person MJLuvsPolar
schedule January 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh thgoodgoodness! I feel such relief that Elrohir chose to 'cleave to elvenkind'. Even my little mantra of 'they get together...eventually' doesn't stop me getting caught up in this wonderful story! And while we're on the subject of getting caught up in the story; have I mentioned that I'm starting to get annoyed with Elladan? No? Well I am! I guess I can understand Elladan's attitude towards Legolas to a certain extent because he obviously doesn't want Elrohir to suffer, but I tend to agree with Elrohir (who after all knows Legolas best) - he *will* be absolutely devestated when he finally realiizes the pain he's caused. And really, Elladan himself has urged Elrohir to speak his mind AND he knows Legolas is slightly clueless in these matters so, really, what does he expect? Hmm well I think I probably need to go do something other than obsess over this series.
Course that doesn't mean I won't be hanging out for your next update Eresse!

Marie :-)
person Lupusdragon
schedule January 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
And there is a collective wiping of the sweat from the brow. I am glad that Elrohir stood by his decision, that he even decided, if truth must be told. I was afraid you would draw it out another chapter. Thank you for not prolonging the torture. I am curious, did you intend for the ceremony to be completed in that manner, or was it altered so Elrohir would not have to confess to whom he bound himself? I realize that it is an odd question to ask, since the obvious answer would be you wrote it how you meant for it to be, but I still feel the compulsion to ask. I can see Gandalf manipulating it slightly, to spare Elrohir and Legolas.

I do pity Legolas. To be so confused by your feelings must be difficult. It seems as though he knows what he is feeling, but does not understand the implications of it.

I also feel badly for Arwen. I pray that she never discovers the truth of Elladan and Elrohir staying in Middle Earth.
person kiki
schedule January 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please don't leave us on cliffhanger.Please update soon,Please.
schedule January 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AAAHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I HATE CLIFFHANGERS LIKE THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! BETTER UPDATE SOON OR I'M GONNA LOSE MY MIND!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person AngelGirl
schedule January 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, goddess you made me cry, and then you left it hanging... oh..... poor Elrohir. you can feel his pain. Wondeious... truly. thank you for this story....
person jamie
schedule January 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this fic is like a drug, I crave more everyday but cannot do anything about it. My withdrawal symptoms lie wholly in your hands, SO PLS UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!! It seems like the perfect time for Legolas to come to terms with his own feelings and profess them before all is lost. Are you updating really really really really soon??? *begs with puppy dog eyes*