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by Sal

person BlackCat9
schedule July 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Figures I like the style of writing it's you writing it...I was thinking I had found two authors in one day that I really really like the way they write stories I take a glance at the name and realize it's you...well I'm put out...lol
I loved this one. Very nice...Not description but thoughts and...yeah you know what I mean...very nice.
~BlackCat9~
person Ibonekoen
schedule January 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow. This was amazing. I loved the way you conveyed the emotion. And thank you! I have been looking for the words to Pippi son song forever! :-D
person zad
schedule January 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I want to call this "sweet", but it was a bit too intense for that... But it was marvelous.
person noviceangel
schedule January 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i had to review this. absolutely loved this fic it's beautifully written and i LOVE billy and dom together.
person Rainien
schedule January 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Some days I review, some days I don't. Today, it seems I will review. Perhaphs because I'm in a talkative mood, perhaps because what I've read today has been particularly good.

I skipped over this for a while because Dom/Billy pairings aren't usually my favorites. I'm glad now that I decided to give this one a chance.

I'm rambling a bit, I know, but that's because I'm still trying to find the right words...

hope in the face of hopelessness...fear of rejection...wonder at gaining the heart's greatest wish

Well done. Very well done. Few authors are able to portray unrequited love without making it sound trite. You've captured this with a poignancy that is wonderfully touching and refreshing.
schedule January 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow! Please keep this one coming, it's fantastic!
person Koh
schedule January 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hehe...loved it. particularly the last paragraph