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for Elen Sila lumenn' tivelo

by Moonshade

person Alyssa
schedule February 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm seriously wondering why there are not more A/L stories in here. They are such a nice couple, and hardly anyone seems to notice......
Honestly - they let every Hinzili and Kunzili jump each others bones, but Aragorn and Legolas, the hottest hotties ever are barely given a chance to jump. That's not fair! Not at all! Lol! ^_~

I like your story, I'm looking forward for more, please continue. Ich möchte wissen wie die Geschichte weitergeht! ^_^
person Sian
schedule February 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ooohhh, getting very interesting! Looking forward to more...
D
person attirb
schedule February 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey, don't despair!
You did a good job with both chapters.
You caught the angsty/hopeless atmosphere in which Aragorn is really well
so that the reader can feel it as well.
Carry on!
person YoukoKali
schedule January 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
^^ I love it! Keep it up! XD I think this is the first A/L story that I've spotted for 3 pages. lol ^^ But any way, the writting is great, and the story sounds wonderful. *Shakes fist* Another chapmustmust be in order! *Flails and cackles*
person Anon
schedule January 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh it's getting good please write more
person TQ
schedule January 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nice descriptions, though a bit short. Will wait eagerly to see the plot develop more.