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July 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awww... I feel really bad for Elrohir. And Legolas because he doesn't know what he's missing. Now, the Fellowship of the ring! This'll be interesting. ^_^
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January 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
A very nice chapter. It is amusing that everyone can see what is between Elrohir and Legolas except Legolas. Ah well, I will remain hopeful. Legolas is a true friend and in his own way he already loves Elrohir. I'll atieatient and weight for him to return the other's deeper affections. How many times have you read The Lord of the Rings to be able to connect your own story to them so flawlessly?
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January 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I didn't know whether I want to laugh or cry. 'woefully oblivious' is an understatement. Still at least he is *slightly* more aware of Elrohir's feelings than he used to be... I suppose. |^_^| Excellent chapter! As always. |^_~|
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January 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ahh my blind Legolas! How much nerves i have wasted with him.. At least this jorney must bring some sence into him because I don't know how much more Elrohir can take.
Update soon please! I am totally hooked to this storry!!
Update soon please! I am totally hooked to this storry!!
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January 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well I can *totally* rstarstand why Elrond, Elladan, Galadrial and even Mithrandir are starting to be concerned that Legolas is worthy of Elrohir's regard! I wanted to hit him myself for making Elrohir so upset and, well - *dejected* However, it is no small thing for him to let Elrohir know of his desire for him and him alone because, for Legolas, that admission comes perilously close to a declaration of his heart. So I can't say I'm surprised that he backed off again, though I AM so pleased he apologised for hurting Elrohir. Being cruel just isn't in Legolas.
I’m certainly no Tolkien expert, but I like the way you’ve exploited his loophole with regard to the Twins' destiny. Actually, you could argue that the movie version of RoTK agrees with you; didn’t Arwen suddenly turn cold when she was confronting Elrond after seeing a vision of her son? To my way of thinking this happened because in her heart, Arwen knew she was connected to Aragorn and regardless of the outcome she was bound to him; and she *really* chose a mortal life. Just a thought.
Eressë, once again I'm amazed at the depth of feeling you manage to invoke in me with this series. After all, G&I 14 had me baying for Elrohir's blood and now I feel slightly distraught for him. We *have* to be getting close to them both being on the same page at the same time surely? Oh and by the way, my giggling fit during RoTK was pretty much induced whenever Aragorn was on a horse! I don't know why it tickled me - it just did. My friends thought I was mad. I've given them the link to this series!
Marie :-)
I’m certainly no Tolkien expert, but I like the way you’ve exploited his loophole with regard to the Twins' destiny. Actually, you could argue that the movie version of RoTK agrees with you; didn’t Arwen suddenly turn cold when she was confronting Elrond after seeing a vision of her son? To my way of thinking this happened because in her heart, Arwen knew she was connected to Aragorn and regardless of the outcome she was bound to him; and she *really* chose a mortal life.
Eressë, once again I'm amazed at the depth of feeling you manage to invoke in me with this series. After all, G&I 14 had me baying for Elrohir's blood and now I feel slightly distraught for him. We *have* to be getting close to them both being on the same page at the same time surely? Oh and by the way, my giggling fit during RoTK was pretty much induced whenever Aragorn was on a horse! I don't know why it tickled me - it just did. My friends thought I was mad. I've given them the link to this series!
Marie :-)
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January 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter.
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January 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You've incorporathe the beginning of the war of the ring into your story excellently and I know you'll continue to do so with the next instalment! Wonderful epic, and I love your portrayal of the love between Elrohir and Legolas, it's just so beautiful. One can only hope for a happy ending, which appears to be the case in the end.
Really anticipating future updates but ironically will be saddened by the fact that the end of the epic is drawing closer too....
Hugz!
Really anticipating future updates but ironically will be saddened by the fact that the end of the epic is drawing closer too....
Hugz!
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January 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Phew, very emotional chapter. I am glad Gandalf is there to help things out between not only Elrohir and Legolas, but with Elladan and Elrond as well.
You know it just struck me (a bit late *blush*...or I have mentioned it before) that the language in which everyone converses isn't just your nowadays usual english! I suddenly started paying attention to it and I believe you are one of the few who can, without ackwardness, insert the word 'nay' into a sentence :)
And lines like:
“Just as his love runs deeper than the deepest seas, so does his valor scale the highest peaks. He would take on all our burdens if he could, even on top of his own.”
Aren't found in just any fanfiction! And still, it is easy and enjoyable to read. Good work once again!
You know it just struck me (a bit late *blush*...or I have mentioned it before) that the language in which everyone converses isn't just your nowadays usual english! I suddenly started paying attention to it and I believe you are one of the few who can, without ackwardness, insert the word 'nay' into a sentence :)
And lines like:
“Just as his love runs deeper than the deepest seas, so does his valor scale the highest peaks. He would take on all our burdens if he could, even on top of his own.”
Aren't found in just any fanfiction! And still, it is easy and enjoyable to read. Good work once again!
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January 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oooooooohhhhhhhhh that was so bittersweet!! I find I can't wait until the next one!! Do be a darling and post the next like...now?! hehe just kidding. WAH!! It was so sweet and I'm almost afraid what will happen in the next one!! *sniffles* Love, DA
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January 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I'm soooooooo sorry I haven't reviewed any of your other stories but I just HAD to review! All of your stories are so great and well-written honestly! I could compare you to Darma Druid the author of Irulan on fanfiction.net. Actually come to think of it, you should read that story, it's really good! But anyways, about your story! It's so great and sad though! I really do hope that Legolas will finally snap out of his foolishness and realize that Elrohir loves him and that he loves him back...*sigh* What fools people are when it comes to love...anyways. I must go now! BYE for now but I look forward to reading more of your stories!