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person Jayn
schedule July 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, in the span of reading this story, I've managed to be defeated by Bowser in Mario (Twice), Cleaned my room and played the best Texas Holdum Tournament of my life and got first palce... *Blink* I like you stories!! They gave me (Mostly) Good luck!! Lol. Very entertaining. *Grins* Now. Onwards!!
person Anita
schedule January 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*lol*

'A dopey grin'...Elladan is very good at getting other people on a straight track (no pun intended there). I think Elrond will later on wish that Estel did follow the Ancient ways, just to get him away from Arwen!

Well, the next chapter with the Ring! That's going to be something and since you stick to the book (yeah!) there will eventually be a meeting of Elrohir and Legolas at the Paths of the Dead...or am I running ahead again with my assumptions? *g*
person Tux
schedule January 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
LMAO!!! That was great! Poor Estel, thrown in at the deep end like that!

Still, I find myself agreeing with Elladan. Legolas is so DENSE! I have a burning desire to hit him over the head with something heavy! Is he *ever* going to realise what he's missing?!
(Though I am hopeful after the end of the last story!)

More soon please!

Tux
person Aly
schedule January 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
What a fun story to wake up to this morning. Poor Estel...well, not really. HEHE Now you just need to get Legolas to open his heart back up to a certain kind of Love and notice what's infront of his nose. Of course when he does, he'll probably have the whole same argument with himself that Elrohir is having about not wanting to risk the friendship. Aiya, sometimes love is too hard. *L*
person Lupusdragon
schedule January 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this interlude. It was hilarious. I don't know which I liked better, Elladan before Estel's "lesson" or Estel after it. All of the conversations once they reached the inn were just this side of brazen. I am a big fan of inuendo, so the wordplay between Miradeth and Elladen was excellent. And later, when Estel discusses Miradeth's methods with Elladan, it was so cute that he was so flustered! Although my favourite line comes at the end "the Wood-elf knew next to nothing about the elven heart and even less about his own." Poor Legolas. But it is so true.

I am rather excited to see how you incorporate LotR in your stories. With Legolas away as one of the Fellowship, there is a great deal of potential for Elrohir angst. I can hardly contain my anticipation!
person Sheeijan
schedule January 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Haiku for Legolas

Noble, golden elf
The flowers bow at your feet.
When will you clue in?
person MJLuvsPolar
schedule January 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I think you're right Eressë - a little levity was in order! I really enjoyed this story; Estel is so cute and I love how Legolas is *still* giving Elroir The Look! I read this right before I headed out to see RoTK again and I just couldn't get it out of my head so you should know I'm blaming you for all the weird looks I got for inappropriately giggling through the whole movie. ;-)

I'm so excited by just the *thought* of the next few stories in this series! One thing I wanted to ask for no other reason then I'm curious - are you going to follow book cannon, movie cannon or a mishmash of the two? As always, I'm looking forward to your next upd.
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Marie :-)
person Deathangelgw
schedule January 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*falls over laughing* OH...MY...GOD!! that was such a stitch!! Sheesh...oh my...hehehe...MORE PLEASE!! *cackles, then sombres* And LES HAS HAD BETTER GET A CLUE!!!!!!!!!!

Love, DA ~_^
person louise_oblique
schedule January 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Way cool

huggs
louise
person viewer
schedule January 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Sorry I didn't get to review the last story, but I enjoyed that one and this one. I hope Legolas gets a clue before he goes off to Mordor.