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by Catalina

person CHeath
schedule April 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very nice. You write very well indeed. I like the playfulness between Elrond and Celebrian. In the film, Elrond is shown as quite reserved, so it's a delight to read this version of him. Well done.
person heartnut
schedule January 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Love this one-shot, Losse! Keep up the great work, and update Suffering soon- it's not only suffering for El and Bri, but for us, too, you know?!? I like the swordplay in this- makes me want to take fencing.
person Tinni
schedule January 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nice
person alena
schedule January 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM


Absolutely gorgeous and delightful! There are so many incredibly beautiful words and imageries (especially of Bri!), and such a sense of joy. And the fencing and the love-making are just...

Absolutely wonderful and delightful. There are so many beautiful words and imageries (especially of Bri!) and such a sense of joy. And the fencing and the love-making are simply...*fans self* Lovely. Just wonderful and lovely.
person Vi Janaway
schedule January 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Such a lovely romantic afteroon.
Thank you
person boz4PM
schedule January 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful. truly beautiful piece of writing. Thankyou - and Elrond and Celebrian are so rarely seen in fanfic. Lovely. Since this is het please consider posting on a site I have discovered - scribeoz.com - which is het only. They would love your story there I am sure.
person kalurien
schedule January 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
The master of beautifully descriptive erotic prose strikes again! :D

[Celebrían giggled. "I must remember to teach you some of the more inventive Silvan curses. Yours are sadly lacking."]

All I could think of was foul-mouthed Haldir. ;)