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person padawan_jinx
schedule February 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hehe... sorry its taken me so long to review.. glad tos ee more chapters up. I shouldnt be online right now but algebra is beating me to death, so I thought I'd treat myself and found ya new chappies. :) When will the girls get their powers back? Any chance they are going to get them back any time soon? And PLEASE tell me Fel Felicity isnt pregnant...*moans*... seems to be an empidemic as of late with fanfic writers.. is it in the water or something? lol

Hope to be on the weekend for more chapters... but no rush or anything. *g*

PJ
person padawan_jinx
schedule January 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
NOpe... all those hits arent from me... though I have read the story twice now so I can get some details straight in mymind. Thanks for answering about the bread...though I thought it was something they only ate in Lorien... I think it was mentioned in Fellowship, but I cant seem to remember exactly where. Oh well.. and that comment about McRivendell had me laughing my ass off. I can just see Elrond standing there in a paper hat flipping burgers and deep frying some Fries. LOL

*waggles finger at more readers*Even a note of 'hey, like the story' would be nice... if people can give reviews to stupid things *mary sues and trashy writing that wont go named*, then they can make an effort and give some good words and encouragment to you for your story.

Oh, and this line...
*Epoloven paced the floor of his lair. “Where are those filthy beasts?” he wondered. “It has been long since they left my presence.”* had me laughing my ass off. I misread it and thought he was pacing in front a a LIAR. I kept imagining an orc lying through his gnarled teeth.. *The check is in the mail! I swear... It wasnt me!* SOrry.. had to share that.


I agree with Kimber... PASS OUT! But how is she going to break the news to Rumil that she loves Leggy? Thats sad some of the sentinals fell... I just hate it when elves die.. seems such a waste.. why kill the cute ones? Kill the ugly humans... keep the cute elves *cheeky grin*

Well now that i've hadfic fic fix, its time to go tackle evil algebra... did Sauron invent this stuff or is of wizard decent?

PJ
person padawan_jinx
schedule January 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well after having horrible algebra tests and chemistry labs that left me feeling frazzled, I"m glad I found ya new postings! The story is absolutely adorable and I cant imagine how Felicity is gonna get out of her marriage. Isnt marriage supposed to be consentual between BOTH parties? Will she tell Galadriel what happened and have Gladdy give Haldir a good butt whooping? I see nothing but trouble for Rumil. he's gonna have his little heart broken... poor little elf! Wonder if there is a support group of heartbroken elves? LOL

I have a questin though... how did the fellowship get lembas when it is made in Lorien? They just now met up with Haldir and Co.. where did they get the Lorien waybread?

I cant believe this story has so many hits and so little reviews.. tisk tisk tisk.. people should be ashamed of themselves! *waggles finger at readers*

PJ
person padawan_jinx
schedule January 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm sooo glawas was able to find this story again! Sorry about not reviewing earlier but school started back and I'm short on time. Luckily I'm on holiday and can enjoy the fic... and its great to see all of it there and not cut off.

Thanks for posting and please, keep it coming!

PJ