rate_review Reviews

you have to write more! i hope someone finds out about his problem.

gripin stuff orli stop it (sob)

love it.......... ummmmmmmmmmm

mostly in response to wanting a beta- if you still need one, I'd be happy to do it

[i don't orli is a vegetarian anymore, actually. my memory might fail me, but i think he was talking about that somewhere a while ago... damn i've lost the addy to the interview. :( ah well, he could just be on/off with it.]

i'm liking this story very much! i like the the way you're dealing with the cutting issue, and the way the plot works itself open unhurried and unharmed. you know you have no reason to rush yourself. it also seems that you have quite a clear idea in your head of what your main character is like. which i appreciate. i'm just waiting to see how you start developing him and the new characters we're all waiting for... ;)

thank you for sharing this story with us. :) i'm looking forward to reading more.

Really nice Story, but by the way Orlando is vegetarian.

oooh !!! a great start ! keep going. it looks like a beginning of an interesting story.

Poor Orli...Bad Viggo!! You've got a good start here. A few grammar/spelling/punctuation errors, but nothing a beta couldn't fix. I'll be looking for updates. *S*

what a creep viggo is poor orli