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It's t! Yt! You've got to keep going!!! I'll do something horrible and drastic if you don't!

This is really really good kinda scary but good... can i be your beta reader?

I'm really into this story at the moment, and I swear to God if you don't continue it soon, I'll.....um......sick my killer whale sized goldfish on you! Trust me. Having to take care of that thing is worse than death, so please please please continue soon!!!

Aww...go on^__^
seems like its getting interesting now....oO

Oi! I wuv this story! If you don't update soon, I shall have to bite you.

Please More!! I am very much enjoying this tale. Poor Orlando, will Johnny save him from himself? I hope so!
Tanesa

Please keep writing! I like this story, and I don't want it to be an eternal WIP because not enough people pressed the little button. BTW, some constructive criticism, proofread lots, cause you've got some typos in there (ie 'minuets' instead of 'minutes'). I know it's anal retentive, that, but I'm a beta-reader. Everytime I see a typo, I want to whip out the red pen! More please!

great chapter! i hope johnny or someone else figure out or suspect something soon...orli needs at least a little support. hmm, hopefully the blood all over will be a one time thing. write more soon

As a self harmer, can I just say how refreshing it is to read a fic. about someone self harming in which the actual feelings and reasons behind the act are mentioned, and the release you get when you do it. In any other fic. i've read where self harm takes place, I've never felt that the author understood the realities of self harm, the whys and hows and the many many lengths people will go to to cover up the fact that they do it.

On a somewhat lighter note. Orli in Mr Potato Head pjs, soooo cute.
I hope you have more Disney pjs in the future of this fic. *wink*

Continue, you sadistic bastard! I love this story!!!!! give me more....