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for A Star is Born.

by orcotp

person dan
schedule January 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
yo mandy t0ld me to come here to respond with mandy and cary as well and so i think your story id pretty fucked up if you know what i mean so leave them alone.
person Katcity
schedule January 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
its the best fucking shit ever!
person reading back
schedule January 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
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person ~*AmAnDa*~
schedule January 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG HOW COULD YOU USE THE LORD JESUS LIKE THAT!?!!? i hope you know that jesus would never do anyhing like that because BEING GAY IS A SIN! peopel who using god and his son like that are going to hell and i hope you know that YOUR GOING TO HELL FOR WRITING BAD THINGS ABOUT THE ONE AND ONLY GOD!!!:(

your the wourst writer EVER its OMG RIDICLUS!!! your story was so DISCUSTING! EWWWW!!!

oh and i hope you know that Jesus died BEFORE words like mofo existed so it doesnt even make any sense to have him say that so it also proves your a bad writen!?!?!

~*AmAnDa*~ AKA CuTE LiL PrInCeS!
person CARRISA :*
schedule January 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey im amz bez best frend CARRISA (:*) and amandad told me to came here but i didnt think it would acually existed i think your story iz horibel and you shoudlnt be able to write anymore story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

she was right becuase she talked about how the lord doesnt like sinnerz who make fun of his son andus wus will make sure that you dont get away with it in the end all i know is that you are oviously a person who does not believe in god like an athyist or a hindi but o well i guess itz your chioce even thought your wrong!
person jim
schedule January 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ha! i did not vomit. i merely gagged a little.
person NessaTarrlom2003
schedule January 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ew, how demented and revolting. I loved it!!!
person Amanda
schedule January 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
What the Hell Was That?