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*sits and stares at screen*
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DAMN that was good! it's just like... o man!
keep up the good work!
wow...

I didnt like Haldir in the movie or the book, but reading this story made me rethink about him. It's rare when an author can change my mind about a character. Keep writing, and I'll keep reading!

"Breathing Deeply walking backwords finding strength to call and ask her rollercoaster, favorite ride, let me kiss you one last time goodnight."
-blink-182
I thought it fit.

oh my! He basicly just raped her! Yeah it was a mistake but he still forced himself onto her. I can see the connec bet between twisted an this one. It was the "no no no...this is not happening" part. This also seems to explain in forsaken when it was mentioned that they almost lost one another. The fading part made that connection. :) I love how you connect your stories in one way or another. Does Janessa have some sort of link? I know they don't have the link that Janessa and legolas does, but like a twin from a another dim. sort of thing? not sure but look forward to reading more. Have to finish another day.
Brenda

omg that was such a sweet chapter. Amost crieere ere for a second there myself. It's also very nice to read a chapter once and awhile that isn't all about sex. They are good, but you need a break from them sometimes. lol Well I'm going to go read your next chapter now. :)
Brenda
p.s. and I don't think I need to tell you how good of a writer you are...so keep posting them here...or on aff.net :) that way I can keep leaving reviews for al to see! :)

Are you not going to put up another chapter? Please?
~Alanna Cooper

Outstanding!

*waves hands in the air* I most certainly do vouge for Shana!!!! We came up with this as a result of an IM conversation that sent us both on a rollercoaster ride. Haldir's POV was from my perspective and Shar from Shana's. This was done on both of our parts to help deal with demons who are chasing both of us.

I have never read a story similar to this, but I also believe Shana was correct in stating that perhaps great minds think alike, and someone else had a similar idea.

This conversation hit me like a ton of bricnd wnd was not borrowed from anyone!

Tal
*done ranting now*

You are in big trouble......ending it there. You know I love this story. Please finish it......or I shall have to thrash you. (just kidding. You know I love ya) UPDATE, UPDATE UPDATE I know what happens, but I will never tell. You will all have to review and wait. *evil laugh*


Tal

Please tell me this story isn't over yet! Besides the breathtaking love scenes which are beautiful because they are so eloquently written...I almost want to say "painted" because I can see it so vividly in my mind...Haldir's unrelenting love for Shar just continues to blow me away. His gentleness with her, his NEED for her, his wanting her to b...i...it makes ll gll glassy eyed! I love this story and would love to see it continue!