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by Shanastay

person MarzBar
schedule April 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YOWZA!! You two (if that's the total number) have even filthier minds than I do. Getting Glory in on it too. I'm impressed and now I need a smoke.
person Elemmire
schedule May 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Holy mother of fucking god...amazing...*gasps* Excuse me while I fetch some towels.
person Sofia
schedule May 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Your right, you do need a couple of towels! Update soon, please!!!
person Brenda
schedule April 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
DAMN!! That was one hell of a fic! and to think, there is still more. Geez what have I been missing out of?? lol *runs off to check out other chapters.
Brenda
person rabe
schedule March 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
awww....evil cliffhanger!! *begs* more please mistress? ;)
person Kittynip9
schedule March 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I swear, the longer you stay on a story the hotter you write it!
person Wilwarin
schedule March 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Sha-- erm, *Mistress* Shanastay...

wow. You're gutsy to write a self insert smut story. If I were half as brave as you, there'd be an RPF fic in the original erotica section with my name on and in it (however, I wouldn't be able to look my boyfriend in the eye for the rest of my life) ^_^

hot, hot stuff. I can't even read one whole chapter without nearly passing out. This is probably the kinkiest thing I've ever read.

And a cold shower doesn't sound too bad right now.
person Tal
schedule March 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*sits in front of industrial-strength fan on high and worries about getting electricuted* You are a very naughty woman!! Glory is so loving this. I dare not even speculate what you and Rose have cooked up for the boys. It is so different to see Haldir as submissive. he he *evil grin*

You know me.....waiting on the next installment (not so patiently)

Tal
person ElerrinaRose
schedule March 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
..............1967 hits??!!?
Wowanksanks everyone! This rocks :)
Keep reading and reviewing, cause I'm eager to start writing chap 5 with Shana.

OH! and in answer to Vanessagotasecret's Q... A spreader bar is a pole with either wrist or ankle shackles on each end. It prevents a slave from closing their legs. It's also more convenient than shackles on a wall because the slave can still be moved... while remaining deliciously spread and open to viewing :)

Hope this has been educational. Thanks for reading :)
~ Elerrina Rose
person Vanessasecrsecret
schedule March 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
::DROOL!!!!::
I'm all tingly from this chapter! I hope you update SOON!
I want to see Rose weild that big black cock! Yay, Rose! You're my hero!
One question. What is a spreader bar? I know I sound like a dork, but I'm not sure what it is :)
Keep up the good work Mistresses! I love your fic!