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for The Little One

by sugarkisses

person angie b.
schedule March 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love your story. i cant wait for the next chapter. please please please please finnish this story. thank you for sharing your talent with the rest of us.
person Everlong
schedule February 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh I love this story so much!

Sean is so hot in this story. Please update soon!
schedule February 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh! That was brillient! More, and soon!
person Rainien
schedule February 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oooo...The plot thickens!
person Anon
schedule February 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
awwww.. awesome update really!!!
I'm so loving this story...
hehe and I'm hot for Viggo ;)
But this Sean is so sweet as well... *sigh*

more soon?

Laila
person Rhanon
schedule February 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh my, my, my. Yes, I like what you've done here. I'm just wondering if we'll get to see Sean turn into a 'big angry bear' anytime soon? You know, that kind of agressiveness always makes for hot monkey love! You've made me a big fan of your perception of Sean. Your use of 'pillow talk' is appreciated, sometimes authors foreget that whole conversations can be had during sex with more than just body parts! Yay you!
person rhiannon
schedule February 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I think that this is an absolutly excellent story. You've done it so well.
Please carry on writing as i want to find out what happens next! Well done for an excellent story!
person Anon
schedule February 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow....
SOOO goood...

Really... I mean, this is the perfect way to interpret a girl and the perfect way to interpret a man - to make me happy *lol*

God brilliant!!!

(www.s3.invisionfree.com/ewac)
person Kathy
schedule February 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic, absolutely wonderful. I love realot yot yet romantic stories. They remind me of when my husband and I got together. Please keep writing, I need more.
schedule February 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I luv it! it is absolutley beautiful! the sex is good, as is the story. i enjoyed this very much. PLS more soon!