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for Greenleaf & Imladris 14 - Crucible of Love

by MPB

person Fan
schedule January 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Excellent story:)

You rock.

Lots of love!!
person ainatellumaien
schedule January 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
aw you made me cry! poor legolas... all i can say is... nothing. wow. you are so talented and this fic is so excet...t...
person Lupusdragon
schedule January 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Dear gods. I am not sure what I was expecting, but I do not believe that was it. I did expect some troubles with the orc hunt, but even the non-con warning did not prepare me for Elrohir's brutality. The poor man is going to extremes to protect his heart, hurting all those he loves in the process. I know he fears the consiquences, but he should tell Legolas what is bothering him and let the Wood-elf decide on his own course of action. This is all so complicated, though, because Elrohir expects that he will only be hurt more if he confesses to Legolas.

This is such an amazingly complex story. Each new chapter draws me in further than I thought possible. You continue to amaze me with the scope of what you have created.
person kirameki
schedule January 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
|o_O| *jaw drops* OMG! How could he do that!!! Poor Legolas! *goes to cuddle him* Oh no, what's going to happen now? That was such a horrid thing to do... and without even giving him a reason. *shakes head* Stupid Elrohir! He's done it now, and there's no going back. How on earth can/will they over come this travesty? Not that I'm giving him excuses or anything, but I do give him credit for holding in his desire for 400 years... that couldn't have been easy. STill, that doesn't give him the excuse to abuse our Legolas like that! He went to far this time.
This chapter was extremely emotional, my eyes even began to tear up! You are a trully talented writer. And thanks for those responces to my reviews you e-mailed me. I never got the chance, to thank you. :)
Now that you've left us at such a cliff hanger, you can't make us wait to long. That would just be cruel. |^_^|
person Reacaire
schedule January 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow...what an awesome chapter. I logged on a lot later than normal today to read another chapter, and I was so late in my coming that there were two...oh, it was wonderful. That was such a great chapter...I cannot wait for more because you are such a wonderful writer.
person Sian
schedule January 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow, chapter 4 gave me goosebumps! Whats is going on with Elrohir?????? You have me so hooked! Please more soon. Wonderful story!
person louise_oblique
schedule January 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow.................... i love how you are building this up, quite fantastic, so much tension, very well done

huggs
louise
person Tinni
schedule January 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well I suppose if Elrohir came clean it wouldn't be much of a story. Anyway, yes the divider in the first chapter does help. Can't wait for more
person HHS
schedule January 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
What's wrong with Elrohir?It's not grief is it?
person AngelGirl
schedule January 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh my goddess, I can't believe that he did that, is Elrohir out of his mind... wow that was so good... I'm loving this epic. I started readding it today, and i just finished with part 14 ch 4 and i got to say i'm in love with your work... keep up the great work