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for Greenleaf & Imladris 14 - Crucible of Love

by MPB

person Lupusdragon
schedule January 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, I should have seen that coming.

They both, Elrohir and Legolas, have such capacity to love, it is a shame that they put themselves and each other through so much pain. Will Elladan be able to help bridge the gap between the two of them, or will it take many years more? Either way, I am ever enchanted by the sencerity and intensity with which you write, ever touch, every spoken word has a purpose. I wonder what purpose young Aragon will play, more than in his ablilty to touch Elrohir's heart.

I truly look forward to seeing the eventual resolution to this newest conflict.
person Pervy Elf
schedule January 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This story is like a rollercoaster on the emotions. My heart felt for Elrohir, knowing still what he did. You write angst incredibly well, and I can't wait for the next chapter. Oh, I hope things work out soon for Elrohir and Legolas. They do work out,...don't they?

person louise_oblique
schedule January 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Absolutly excellent, this story (saga) is getting better and better. very well done

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louise
person Gilraen
schedule January 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ok now you really made me cry! This was wonderful chapter! Things look brighter now and i so very hope those two get together.. I have stopped long time ago trying to guess what will happen next so i will just wait and see! Please update soon :)
person louise_oblique
schedule January 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
he he he, that was very very very cool! :);) well done I LOVE this series, you go girl!!!!!!!!!!!! brilliant, fantastic, amusing, tense, full of drama, just fantastic. I'm filled with anticipation for you next part
sorry short bedtime :)
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louise
person louise_oblique
schedule January 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Exceptionally good, but OMG poor legolas (cries) that was just awful, very very well done

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louise
person Pervy Elf
schedule January 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
...Wow...I...I don't know what to say. I think for the first time, I have been rendered speechless. I didn't see that coming. I thought that it might, but...wow...I normally don't go for non-con stories, but this has got me *extremely* curious as to how this will all play out. Oh my, this does not bode well. At. All.
For some reason, I have a resounding urge to kick Elrohir in the head. As much as I love the elf, he deserves it.
person kirameki
schedule January 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ah-ha! I knew it! It WAS because of Legolas' being injured 6 years ago! |^_^| I feel proud of myself. And so that's why he was being rough, it was self-hatred. It all makes sense now. |-_-| Though my heart goes out to Elrohir. Still, he did it knowing full well the consequences. The saddest thing of all is that he knows thatd itd it makes it hurt all the more. Ah, poor elf. I know Legolas won't hold a grudge, for long anyway. It's not in his nature. |^_^| Can't wait for the next chapter, as always.
person Tinni
schedule January 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I saw this coming but still.... will Elrohir finally tell. He can't think his relationship with Legolas will get any worse.
person Tinni
schedule January 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I suppose it was too much to hope that Elrohir would come clean about all his feelings. But than Legolas's heart is still closed (or so he says).