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Back again for more stories. And I found where i left off too! Very interesting story. I was shocked at what happened though. On to the next story!! ^_^

I almost cried, I was so happy by the end of this chapter! That was a glorious reconciliation. Legolas is so close to understanding his heart, now that he has finally reailzed he desires Elrohir. It is not so large a jump from the love of a friend combined with desire to romantic love. The courting dance really is a complicated one ^_^

I have to say, the way you write the scenes of intimacy is beautiful. The style and the way you use language clearly reflects the love and the passion that fill these acts. You get across all of the emotion, which is in this case what is most important, without needing to become overly graphic in your writing. It is truly a scene between two lovers and not pornography. I admire that.

I look forward to the nextthisthis series. It promises to be as intriguing as the rest, if the summery is anything to go by!

oh absolutely puuuuuuurrrrrrrrrrrrific!! Superb!! What a way to bind that ending and now I...WANT...MORE!!!

wow...the feelings...I was seriously crying in the part before the last cuz it was soooooooo heart breaking!! WOW WOW WOW...incredible!! Have I told you how much I wuv your writing?! YUMMERS!! MORE SOON!! Love, DA

Due to some unforeseen troubles at my clinical placement in Canada, I am home again (which means constant computer acces again *g*). And I am greated by a new part with 6 chapters!
I think part 14 is a very important part in you series as it tells us about Legolas' changing feelings for Elrohir (eventually in a good way). I wanted to smack Elrohir in the head for being so stubborn. Luckily the ever saving lord Elrond is there to say something that penetrates his sons thick skull :)
Very well written, as ever. And I am looking forward to the next part...it should be fun!

|^___^| Yay, such a happy outcome. Expected though it was, I loved it. I knew Legolas wouldn't let things stand as they were. And it seems he is being at least a bit more open with his feelings, even if hesn'sn't realize them yet. |^_~| Can't wait for the next segment of the saga. Sounds intriguing.

Oh, I'm so glad they made up...I just hope that Legolas ends up realizing that he loves Elorhir! Who I am still a bit miffed at though for that little non-con...you're such a good writer!!

I am glad they are friends again.

You had me worried for a moment there. I was afraid that Elrohir was dreaming, and that just would not do. BUT, he wasn't and this chapter is one of the best yet! And not just because there's a couple of naked Elves...'though, that does help a bit. ^.~ Anywho, what a magnificent ending to one of the most worrisome chapters yet! Of course I mean worrisome in a good way. You know, the suspense of an angst riddled story. Great stuff. Most abundant in your writing. I look forward to the next chapter!

That's so sad!I don't like Elrohir to be sad.

EXCELLENT! BRILLIANT! Please continue! This story has me hooked. There is so much emotion and wonderful attention to each characters feelings and thoughts. Great stuff! Pleaaassee update soon!! xxx