rate_review Reviews

Honestly, you write a perfectly acceptable piece of pwp, but like most adut fanfiction writers, you ruin it utterly by using words like 'cock'. This is Tolkien you moron! Writing pwp is bad enough, but show him a tiny bit of respect by making the language a little more poetic. Teenagers make a better job of this than you lot.

This was so nicely done. Bitter with the sweet.
Vi

That was so sad. And such a wonderfully written piece.