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for Suffering

by Catalina

person Little she-bear
schedule March 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Give her the letter! ARGH! ::bangs head against a wall::

I have no words to describe how great this story is. I'm reviewing, not give advice, just to let you know that I'm reading and enjoying. Enjoying muchly.
person alena
schedule March 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh Elbereth. *sniffles, then bawls, then screams*
You are evil, evil, evil. Erg. I want to both cuddle them and shake them violently by the shoulders.
person silindro
schedule February 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
oh good god. this fic was so good. ouslously, it shows real tension. i wnat more, and i want it now.
person Blacknoise
schedule February 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I thought there's be more!!
person sarah
schedule February 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Please continue! This is very good.Such misunderstandings.I love the way you show how two two people can get from understanding each other.I feel for both of them.Sarah.
person Eärelen
schedule February 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
AAAAUUUUUGGGGHHHHH!

Losse, how can you continue to torture us like this? How can you keep them apart any longer? You cruel, cruel thing!

This is another great chapter -- your writing is excellent, I really feel for the characters, while at the same time wanting to smack them upside the head.

Talk about the "stiff necks of the Elves" -- sheesh!

Please don't drag this out too much longer, okay? I might explode.
person Anon
schedule February 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
"he wondered what or who had engendered this in her"

I think Glorfindel should stay away from couples filled with jealousy...:p

Great fic, and great angst, hoping for more.

A series of unfortunate misunderstandings...
person darksilver
schedule February 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ooh! I love it! You've updated much faster this time :)...perhaps even faster for the next chap? -hopefully-
Things are getting more and more interesting...poor elfies. -cackle-

When will they find out they truly love each other, though? I can't wait!

Bloody brilliant!

Silver~
person kalurien
schedule February 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I can hardly type this through my tears. Oh, my god, this is just getting sadder and sadder. They are hurting each other so much, how will they ever come back from this? Losse, you are such a powerful writer and I hate you! ;) You are ripping my guts out! Loved El sitting in the tree *hugs him* hehe hickies! *dies*
person Isa
schedule February 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh, you're killing me with all this angst!
I love it!
But I still can't wait for them to be happy.
Hope you update soon!