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August 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Okay this is beyond good. This is brillent. I wish yould uld post more often, having to wait a month for a chapter is really cruel. I also wish that that desk would break and Celebrian would see that letter thus ending this unnecessary suffering. But that I suppose is too much to hope for within the next couple of chapters.
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August 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love your story. As much as I want to see them happy at last, what is more important , I want more. Please update soon. Oh, I might be a little thick, but how did they ever get the idea that the other one is not in love? Just because their wedding night was not exactly as hoped???(Well it often is not, without such consequences).
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July 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
^_^; I truly enjoy this story, I believe I've read the current chapters several times. I hope you can update soon.
Oh, and if you ever lose inspiration just remember, " in in doubt, add rain.". ~.^
Oh, and if you ever lose inspiration just remember, " in in doubt, add rain.". ~.^
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July 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hello,
I was very glad to see more chapters since I last visited awhile back.
Please continue with the story. It is a very good story. very sad, I feel for them both.
Sarah.
I was very glad to see more chapters since I last visited awhile back.
Please continue with the story. It is a very good story. very sad, I feel for them both.
Sarah.
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June 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*cough* That first part there was... intriguing. And enlightening. Let's just say I have a myriad of ideas for that smut challenge ;)
This is a new way to look at El and Bri's early relationship. I've always liked to think that they loved one another from the beginning, but this is definitely a highly plausible (and angsty) interpretation.
This is a new way to look at El and Bri's early relationship. I've always liked to think that they loved one another from the beginning, but this is definitely a highly plausible (and angsty) interpretation.
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June 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Gah! Chapter 2 is annoying. I just want to shove them together and tell them to get it on! ;) Why can't they see what is so obvious, and when will Gofi quit being so dense? (yes, I have read the rest, and do know what happens, but I still think he's dense)
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June 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*growl* We don't like Luinen in the least, precioussss.... Child-bride indeed! *scoffs*
Ah, that scene was just... um... loverly. The passion. I love the way they let themselves go here. And an interesting way for the twins to be concieved.
I was just thinking. This does seem to offer a most interesting idea about why Arwen was born 129 years after the twins. She was the product of love, maybe, after all of this is resolved.
Ah, that scene was just... um... loverly. The passion. I love the way they let themselves go here. And an interesting way for the twins to be concieved.
I was just thinking. This does seem to offer a most interesting idea about why Arwen was born 129 years after the twins. She was the product of love, maybe, after all of this is resolved.
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June 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Aw... lil elflings. And for a moment there it's almost like they're a family. They let themselves go for a tiny moment, and their tenderness shows through. Loverly, really.
And I have a feeling we'll be seeing that letter again. Most definitely. *cough*
And I have a feeling we'll be seeing that letter again. Most definitely. *cough*
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June 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
GRRRRRRRR...... This was a simply evil chapter. EVIL!!!! >:( You are so mean to the El and the Bri. Why are they not acting out those dreams instead of fighting so much? WHY!!!
But the boys are just precious, and the scene with El and Bri, all that tension, really. It was very well done and it just broke my heart to see her cast off her ring like that.
But the boys are just precious, and the scene with El and Bri, all that tension, really. It was very well done and it just broke my heart to see her cast off her ring like that.
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June 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Poor, injured El. And Celebrian gets to nurse him back to health! Those scenes are so tender and loving. I just wish they would get to the point and realize one another's love alreay, though. It's so frustrating! ;)
And that part where they are agreeing to live a life together yet separate. How evil. You know what you are doing to me? Do you know how this is driving me into utter madness?
*pokes you to write more, quickly*
And that part where they are agreeing to live a life together yet separate. How evil. You know what you are doing to me? Do you know how this is driving me into utter madness?
*pokes you to write more, quickly*