rate_review Reviews

Uhm, the 1-0-0 looked so nice but I just HAD to review!

As always, I love your description. I plant such great images in my head while reading and never does it feel wordy or unnecessary. And how seamless the description are connected with the dialogue! Well done. *Isis is in awe once again*

And then of course, there is the plot. Evilness upon evilness! I'm surprised that El and Brí don't burst from all the UST. Well, ok, *cough* it's not unresolved any more. Whoopee, hot dream sex that's all to real! That's going to be one hell of a "day after" wake up.

Personally, I pray that Celeborn or Galadriel will figure something out. Celeborn has heard one side yet.... Eeep! The tension is killing me!! (Not really but... sorry, I'm a little hyper today... ;) )

stop making them suffer! E*
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(really though... good story ^.^ Such vivid characters...)

hi,

update *me hugs the nearest elf*.. I need more of this story!
It is like drug... addictive... I wanna read more, please?

bye
-K-

I just wanted to say how really wonderfully written this is..your descriptive ability is so very very good. This is such a polished piece of work. And I love the way you have Bri and el dance around their pain, carrying on trying to be normal. Just excellent detail. You're a very good writer. Very strong and emotional

Wow! This was incredible! I love this story- and you tell it so very well. The characters are so real. I was happy to see Cirdan here. Seems like he's very insightful. Wish Elrond would listen! ;) Poor Celebrian- she's so mixed up she doesn't know what to think! Wish they all weren't so proud.

ELROND HOW STUPID CAN YOU POSSIBLY BE?!?!?!?!?!?!?! SHE WAS COMING ON TO YOU, YOU IDIOT!!!!!!

*screams*

how long are you planning on making this losse? why can't they just MAKE UP!!!!!!!!

WHYWHYWHYWHYWHYWHYWHYWHYWHYWHYWHYWHY!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?

*knocks self unconscious from banging head against wall in frustration*

I might just have to kill you sometime soon. ;) I can't believe how long you've been able to milk this evil!idea. "Suffering" is a very apt title. ;)

::cries:: That was really good/well written! I hope you find the inspiration to update as soon as possible, I cannot wait to read more! ^_^

Felt like knocking poor Elrond on the side of the head when he removed Celebrian's hand from his thigh to her lap. Too blind to see an affectionate squeeze or to accept it.

Please update soon! Really love your story!

You take the torture to new heights! All these many times they have hurt each other because of pride, it's heartbreaking! Círdanms pms perceptive. I hope he stays long enough to give one of them a hard enough nudge into the right direction.

The scene with Elrond alone in his study, his thoughts... Brilliant! Poor, torn elfies. *sniff*